Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用简单句表达原因，避免重复和冗长。

예시: I liked singing when I was a child, but now I don't enjoy it because my family often says my singing is hard to listen to.

제안: 回答中语法和用词错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子直接回答问题，并说明原因，避免语法错误。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally. I just watch some videos for fun.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误影响理解。建议先直接回答问题，然后用连接词补充原因，句子简洁明了。

예시: I don't want to sing for anyone because my family says my singing is hard to listen to. So, I prefer to sing alone where no one can hear me.

제안: 回答中出现了明显的词汇错误（如'seeing leather sports'），影响表达。建议使用正确词汇，表达清晰，避免错误。

예시: Yes, I think singing can make people happy. It helps relax the mind and forget unhappy things.

× When I was a kid I like singing but now I don't like because I my parents and my sister always told me that I'm saying it's hard to listening so I don't like.

✓ When I was a kid I liked singing but now I don't like it because my parents and my sister always told me that my singing is hard to listen to so I don't like it.

这里的动作发生在过去，应该使用过去时态，'like' 应改为 'liked'。另外，句中存在动词形式错误和缺少宾语的问题，'I'm saying' 应改为 'my singing'，'hard to listening' 应改为 'hard to listen to'。

× No not really, I just saying to watch some videos and I think thing is just for fun and so I don't learn how to sing.

✓ No, not really. I just watch some videos and I think singing is just for fun so I don't learn how to sing.

'I just saying' 中 'saying' 用法错误，应使用动词原形 'watch'。另外，'thing' 应改为 'singing'，因为这里指的是唱歌这件事。

× Think for maybe no one because my family always think my singing is hard to listening so maybe I will sing just to myself and some place no one can listen to me.

✓ I think maybe no one because my family always thinks my singing is hard to listen to, so maybe I will sing just to myself in some place where no one can listen to me.

'Think for maybe no one' 结构不正确，应为 'I think maybe no one'。'hard to listening' 应改为 'hard to listen to'。'sing just to myself and some place' 应改为 'sing just to myself in some place'，并补充关系从句 'where no one can listen to me'。

× Yes, I think so. I think seeing leather sports can bring you happy and easy your mind and help you to forget some unhappy things.

✓ Yes, I think so. I think singing can bring you happiness, ease your mind, and help you forget some unhappy things.

'seeing leather sports' 是错误表达，应为 'singing'。'bring you happy' 应改为 'bring you happiness'，因为 'happy' 是形容词，需用名词形式 'happiness'。'easy your mind' 应改为 'ease your mind'，'help you to forget' 中 'to' 可省略。