Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit redundant and unclear in places. Try to make your sentences more concise and grammatically correct. Also, avoid awkward phrasing like "to exercise more to feel the feelings of the song" and "It will be me immersed in it." Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express the emotions of the song. When I sing, I feel completely immersed in the music, which is very refreshing.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like "I have no idea about that." Also, use more precise vocabulary such as "singing techniques" instead of "singing skills or those pitch."

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing or studied singing techniques. However, I taught myself to sing songs by listening to them several times and following the lyrics.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains informal language and some grammatical mistakes. Avoid using slang like "Cos" and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why you sing for your friends.

예시: I usually sing for my friends because they also enjoy singing. We often go to karaoke together once a week or a few times a month, which is a great way for us to relax and have fun.

제안: There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing in your answer. For example, "saying" should be "singing." Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, be more specific about how singing brings happiness.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When you sing, you can share your voice with friends or an audience, and everyone can enjoy the music together, which creates a joyful atmosphere.

× Yes, I do really like singing because it's a very good way for me to relax myself and to exercise more to feel the feelings of the song.

✓ Yes, I really do like singing because it's a very good way for me to relax and to exercise more to feel the feelings of the song.

The phrase 'do really like' is awkward; 'really do like' is the correct adverb placement for emphasis. Also, 'relax myself' is incorrect; 'relax' is a transitive verb here and does not need a reflexive pronoun.

× It will be me immersed in it.

✓ I will be immersed in it.

The phrase 'It will be me immersed in it' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'I will be immersed in it' using the passive participle 'immersed' and the correct subject pronoun 'I'.

× No, I have no experience of learning how to sing, especially those singing skills or those pitch.

✓ No, I have no experience learning how to sing, especially those singing skills or pitch.

The phrase 'experience of learning' is better expressed as 'experience learning'. Also, 'those pitch' is incorrect because 'pitch' is uncountable here and should not have 'those'.

× But I learned how to sing a song by myself just to follow lyrics.

✓ But I learned how to sing a song by myself just by following the lyrics.

The phrase 'just to follow lyrics' is incorrect; it should be 'just by following the lyrics' to indicate the method used.

× The reason I can sing the song after I heard it several times.

✓ The reason I can sing the song is that I heard it several times.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'is that' completes the sentence and clarifies the cause-effect relationship.

× While I usually sing for my friends Cos my friends also like sing songs, we would go to karaoke maybe once a week or three times a month.

✓ I usually sing for my friends because my friends also like singing songs; we go to karaoke maybe once a week or three times a month.

'Cos' is informal and should be replaced with 'because'. Also, 'like sing songs' is incorrect; it should be 'like singing songs'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× It's a good way for us to relax or just enjoy the life.

✓ It's a good way for us to relax or just enjoy life.

The phrase 'enjoy the life' is incorrect; 'life' is uncountable here and does not need the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, of course saying can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, of course singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

The word 'saying' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'singing'.

× When you are saying, you can show your voice to your friends or to the audience and they can enjoy just the music itself and you can also enjoy the your friends songs.

✓ When you are singing, you can show your voice to your friends or to the audience, and they can enjoy the music itself, and you can also enjoy your friends' songs.

'Saying' should be 'singing'. 'Enjoy just the music itself' is awkward; 'enjoy the music itself' is better. 'The your friends songs' is incorrect; it should be 'your friends' songs' with the possessive apostrophe.