Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and fluent by avoiding unnecessary pauses and filler words. Also, use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail.

예시: No, I don't like singing because I believe I lack talent in this area. However, I really enjoy listening to music and appreciate different genres.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your speech clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about your experience with music.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think I have a natural ability for it. However, I have tried to learn to play instruments like the guitar and piano.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer expressions. Avoid vague phrases and provide specific examples to support your answer.

예시: I am quite shy, so I have never sung in public or in front of my family and friends. However, when I am alone, especially in the shower, I like to sing popular songs by artists like Adam Levine.

제안: Improve your vocabulary and sentence structure to express your ideas more clearly. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because music is very relaxing and comforting. It connects deeply with our emotions and can fill us with passion and joy.

× I'm one of the fans about music.

✓ I'm one of the fans of music.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express being a fan of something is 'of'. So, 'fans of music' is the correct phrase.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In American English, the past participle of 'learn' is 'learned'. 'Learnt' is more common in British English. Depending on the variety, 'learned' is preferred in this context.

× I try to learn about the, uh, instrumental music, about the guitar, piano or something like that.

✓ I try to learn instrumental music, like the guitar, piano or something like that.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary here. We say 'learn instrumental music' and use 'like' to give examples, not 'about'.

× I never try to sing in a public or with my family, my friend and anyone else.

✓ I never try to sing in public or with my family, my friends, or anyone else.

The phrase 'in public' does not require an article. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context, and 'or' is better than 'and' when listing alternatives.

× I think about my myself and repeat the very famous music with Adam and something like that.

✓ I think about myself and repeat very famous songs by Adam and others.

The phrase 'my myself' is incorrect; 'myself' alone is correct. Also, 'music' should be pluralized to 'songs' for clarity, and 'with Adam' is better expressed as 'by Adam' when referring to songs.

× music is is so confidential and had this so relaxing and feels comfortable because it's a very related to your soul and you can feel you feel full of passion and something like that.

✓ Music is so comforting and relaxing and feels comfortable because it's very related to your soul, and you can feel full of passion and things like that.

The word 'confidential' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'comforting'. Also, 'had this so relaxing' is grammatically incorrect and should be 'and relaxing'. The phrase 'a very related to your soul' is incorrect; it should be 'very related to your soul'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.