Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“like sing a song”应为“like singing songs”。回答较简短且有语法不连贯，建议使用完整句子并避免断句。

예시: Yes, I like singing songs because it often makes me feel happy and relaxed.

제안: 回答表达了想学唱歌的意愿，但“decent singing way”表达不自然，建议使用更地道的表达，如“proper singing techniques”。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing, but I actually want to learn proper singing techniques.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和逻辑混乱，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I want to sing for myself because it makes me feel happy and calm, which helps me manage my emotions.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“it will singing will bring”。建议使用正确时态和更自然的表达。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people everywhere, no matter where you go or what language you speak.

× Yes, I like sing a song because.

✓ Yes, I like singing a song because.

动词like后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里应使用singing而不是sing。

× Yes, I like sing a song because.

✓ Yes, I like singing a song because singing often makes me feel happy and relaxed.

句子结构不完整，because后面缺少原因，需补充完整句子。

× Yes, it did.

✓ Yes, it does.

此处谈论的是一般现在时的事实，应该用does而不是did。

× it will singing will bring happiness and adventures for you.

✓ it will bring happiness and adventures for you.

情态动词will后应接动词原形，不能接动名词singing。