Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的情感，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

예시: Yes, I love singing because my biggest dream is to become a superstar. I often practice singing alone to improve my skills.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏连贯性。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I have never received formal singing lessons, but I have tried to teach myself by practicing regularly.

제안: 回答表达了情感，但句子结构不够自然，部分用词不准确。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意词汇的准确性。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she works very hard and always takes good care of me. I love her very much.

제안: 回答不完整，句子结构不连贯，表达不自然。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，使回答更流畅和具体。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. For example, when I sing beautiful songs, people often feel excited and enjoy my voice.

× I'm definitely love singing because my biggest dream is to be a very superstar a a very a super diva and I often practice my singing skills all the time alone, so I think I will.

✓ I definitely love singing because my biggest dream is to be a very superstar, a very super diva, and I often practice my singing skills all the time alone, so I think I will.

这里错误地使用了“I'm definitely love”，应改为“I definitely love”，因为“love”是动词，前面不需要“am”形式。

× my biggest dream is to be a very superstar a a very a super diva

✓ my biggest dream is to be a very superstar, a very super diva

“a a very a super diva”中重复使用了不定冠词“a”，应去掉多余的冠词，保持句子通顺。

× I yes, I think I have ever tried to learn how to sing, but I'm, I mean, I'm I was not accepted the very normal training.

✓ Yes, I think I have tried to learn how to sing, but I mean, I was not accepted into the normal training.

“have ever tried”中“ever”用法不当，改为“have tried”；“was not accepted the very normal training”缺少介词，应为“was not accepted into the normal training”。

× I was not accepted the very normal training.

✓ I was not accepted into the normal training.

“accepted”后面需要介词“into”来引出被接受的对象，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× I think the most important person I want to see for is my mother because she is a really hard working and diligent woman in my heart and I love her very much because she always takes care of me very carefully.

✓ I think the most important person I want to sing for is my mother because she is a really hardworking and diligent woman in my heart and I love her very much because she always takes care of me very carefully.

“want to see for”应为“want to sing for”，动词和介词搭配错误。

× she is a really hard working and diligent woman in my heart

✓ she is a really hardworking and diligent woman in my heart

“hard working”应写作一个词“hardworking”，作为形容词使用。

× when I used to sing some very brilliant songs to people, they often feel excited and amazed for my voice.

✓ when I used to sing some very brilliant songs to people, they often feel excited and amazed by my voice.

“amazed for my voice”中介词用错，应为“amazed by my voice”，表示被声音所惊讶。