Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“Through seeing”应为“Through singing”。建议注意语法准确性，避免用词错误，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, definitely. I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions clearly.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“search some information on the Internet, like teaching the amateur how to sing”表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免口语化的填充词。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I plan to find online tutorials to improve my skills.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“with the very closing and loving people”应为“with very close and loving people”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连词使表达更连贯。

예시: Honestly, I prefer to sing for myself or my close friends because it helps me express myself and strengthen our relationships.

제안: 回答中存在多处语法和用词错误，如“the sun is seen”应为“the song is sung”，“pure some people's heart”表达不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点。

예시: Yes, definitely. Whether sung by amateurs or professionals, singing can express emotions directly and cheer people up, bringing happiness.

× I like singing very much because singing for me is a way of relaxation and expressing.

✓ I like singing very much because singing for me is a way of relaxation and expression.

这里“expressing”用作名词时应使用名词形式“expression”，而不是动名词形式“expressing”。动名词通常表示动作，而名词形式表示概念或状态。

× Through seeing I can calm myself down and also can express all my emotions very directly.

✓ Through singing I can calm myself down and also can express all my emotions very directly.

句中“seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。这里是词汇错误，需用正确的动名词形式表达意思。

× Well, actually I have never learned how to sing, but I would like to, you know, search some information on the Internet, like teaching the amateur how to sing, like to have a better performance?

✓ Well, actually I have never learned how to sing, but I would like to, you know, search for some information on the Internet, like teaching amateurs how to sing, to have a better performance.

“search”后应加介词“for”构成短语“search for”，表示“搜索”。“the amateur”应改为复数“amateurs”，表示泛指业余爱好者。句尾问号不合适，应改为句号。

× Honestly, I do have a very specific target audience. Instead, I prefer to sing to myself or to my very close friends.

✓ Honestly, I do have a very specific target audience. Instead, I prefer to sing to myself or to my very close friends.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× Because singing with myself or with the very closing and loving people, it helped me to enhance the relationship and to express myself.

✓ Because singing by myself or with very close and loving people helps me to enhance relationships and to express myself.

“closing”应为形容词“close”，表示亲近的意思。主语是singing，谓语应使用现在时“helps”，因为表达的是习惯性动作。关系名词“relationship”应使用复数“relationships”，表示多种关系。

× I think no matter the sun is seen by normal people or a professional singer, singing can deliver the emotions very directly and maybe it will pure some people's heart and or cheer some people up and it definitely brings something good related to.

✓ I think no matter the song is sung by normal people or a professional singer, singing can deliver emotions very directly and maybe it will purify some people's hearts or cheer some people up, and it definitely brings something good.

“sun”应为“song”，语义错误。动词“pure”应为“purify”，表示净化。名词“heart”应为复数“hearts”，表示多人的心。句子结构混乱，需调整连接词和句子顺序，使表达更清晰。