Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I can have my singing along' nên sửa thành 'I can sing along'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và chú ý chia động từ đúng (ví dụ: 'Singing make me' nên là 'Singing makes me').

예시: Of course, I'm not a very good singer, but whenever I hear my favorite song in a public place, I like to sing along. Singing makes me feel happy and relaxed, so I really enjoy it.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'help me enjoy' nên là 'helps me enjoy', 'sometime' nên là 'sometimes'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ như 'I'm I'm'.

예시: No, I have never learned to sing professionally because I never dreamed of becoming a singer. However, at school, we often sing songs in subjects like music and language classes, which helps me enjoy singing casually. Although I'm not trained, I like singing for fun with my friends sometimes.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ 'this is a little bit shy' nên là 'I feel a little bit shy'. Bạn nên chia câu rõ ràng, tránh câu quá dài và dùng từ phù hợp hơn như 'sometimes' thay vì 'sometime'.

예시: I usually sing for myself because I feel a little bit shy when I have to sing in front of many people. However, sometimes I sing for my family or with my friends when we go to karaoke. I also enjoy singing simply when I'm in the bathroom.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'can brings' nên là 'can bring', 'are loved right because' nên là 'are loved because'. Ngoài ra, câu cuối nên rõ ràng hơn, ví dụ 'helps people relax with trifle' không rõ nghĩa, nên sửa thành 'helps people relax and connect with others'.

예시: Of course, singing can bring a huge sense of happiness to people. For example, many famous singers are loved because their songs express deep emotions and inspire listeners. Music is an important part of human life as it helps people relax and connect with others.

× Of course I'm not a very good singer, but whenever I heard my favorite song in public place I can have my singing along.

✓ Of course I'm not a very good singer, but whenever I hear my favorite song in a public place I can sing along.

The sentence mixes past tense 'heard' with present ability 'can'. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'hear' is correct. Also, 'have my singing along' is incorrect; it should be 'sing along'. 'Public place' needs an article 'a'.

× Singing make me feel happy and relaxed so I really enjoy it.

✓ Singing makes me feel happy and relaxed so I really enjoy it.

The subject 'Singing' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' not 'make' to agree in number.

× No, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I have never dreamed to become a singer.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I have never dreamed of becoming a singer.

The verb 'dream' is usually followed by 'of' plus gerund ('becoming'), not 'to' plus infinitive. Also, 'dreamed of becoming' is the correct expression.

× However, at school we often sing songs as part of different subjects such as music and language class, which help me enjoy singing casually.

✓ However, at school we often sing songs as part of different subjects such as music and language classes, which help me enjoy singing casually.

'Music and language class' should be plural 'classes' because it refers to multiple subjects. Also, 'help' is correct as it refers to plural 'subjects'.

× And though I'm I'm not trained, I like singing for fun with my friends sometime.

✓ And though I'm not trained, I like singing for fun with my friends sometimes.

Repeated 'I'm' is a typo. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× I usually sing this for myself because this is a little bit shy when I have to sing before a lot of people, but I do things for my family sometime or with my friends I'm going to the karaoke or just simply singing when I'm in bathroom.

✓ I usually sing by myself because I am a little bit shy when I have to sing in front of a lot of people, but I sometimes sing for my family or with my friends when I go to karaoke or just simply sing when I'm in the bathroom.

'Sing this for myself' is unnatural; 'sing by myself' is better. 'This is a little bit shy' should be 'I am a little bit shy'. 'Before a lot of people' should be 'in front of a lot of people'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I'm going to the karaoke' should be 'when I go to karaoke'. 'In bathroom' needs article 'the bathroom'. Also, verb forms adjusted for consistency.

× Of course, singing can brings a huge sense of happiness to people.

✓ Of course, singing can bring a huge sense of happiness to people.

Modal verb 'can' is followed by base form of verb without 's'. 'Can brings' is incorrect; it should be 'can bring'.

× For example, many famous singers are loved right because their song can express deep emotion and inspire listeners.

✓ For example, many famous singers are loved because their songs can express deep emotions and inspire listeners.

'Song' should be plural 'songs' to agree with plural possessive 'their'. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match 'deep' and plural context.

× Music is an important part in human life as it helps people relax with trifle and connected with others.

✓ Music is an important part of human life as it helps people relax with trifles and connect with others.

The correct preposition is 'part of' not 'part in'. 'Trifle' should be plural 'trifles' meaning small things. 'Connected' should be 'connect' to parallel 'relax'.