Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言表达不够自然，且有语法错误，如“see my favorite songs”应为“listen to my favorite songs”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and improve my mood. For instance, when I feel pressured, I usually listen to my favorite songs to relax.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“professional nursing class”应为“professional singing class”，且句子不完整。建议简洁明了地表达，并注意用词准确。

예시: Actually, I have never attended a professional singing class, but I learned to sing by imitating actors and actresses performing in TV shows and movies.

제안: 回答表达了想为妈妈唱歌的愿望，但语法和用词不够准确，如“Can't Sing songs well”应为“can't sing well”。建议使用更自然的句式，并注意语法正确。

예시: I want to sing for my mom because she loves music, but she can't sing very well. Singing for her would make her very happy, and I think it's a meaningful gesture.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清晰，如“on seeing”应为“singing”，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并提供具体例子。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people who are feeling down. For example, when my friend was upset about an unfair exam result, she listened to cheerful songs to help her relax.

× I really love singing because singing can help me get out of my unhappy and sad things.

✓ I really love singing because singing can help me get out of my unhappy and sad feelings.

这里'sad things'用法不当，应该用'sad feelings'表示情绪。虽然不属于严格的语法错误，但更准确的表达是用名词'feelings'。

× I usually see my favorite songs to leave my mood.

✓ I usually listen to my favorite songs to lift my mood.

动词'see'用错了，应该用'listen to'表示听歌；'leave my mood'表达不正确，应该用'lift my mood'表示改善心情。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语，'learned'是美式英语，两者都正确，但根据上下文选择统一用法。这里建议用'learned'。

× I have not uh, had the experience to attend the professional nursing class

✓ I have not had the experience of attending a professional singing class

'experience to attend'用法错误，应该用'experience of attending'；'nursing class'应为'singing class'，根据语境修正。

× I know how to sing from the actor or actress, umm, perform in the TV show or movie.

✓ I know how to sing by watching actors or actresses perform in TV shows or movies.

'from the actor or actress perform'结构不正确，应该用'by watching actors or actresses perform'，且复数形式更合适。

× I try to imitate their sing style and.

✓ I try to imitate their singing style.

'sing'应改为动名词形式'singing'来修饰'style'。

× Although my mom really love music but she she Can't Sing songs well.

✓ Although my mom really loves music, she can't sing songs well.

'mom'是单数，谓语动词应为'loves'，且句子中多余的'but'和重复的'she'应删除。

× Therefore, sing for my mom can make my mom very happy and it's a very appreciative thing.

✓ Therefore, singing for my mom can make her very happy, and it's a very meaningful thing.

句子结构不完整，'sing for my mom'应改为动名词形式'singing for my mom'作主语；'appreciative thing'用词不当，改为'meaningful thing'更合适。

× Yes, on seeing can bring happiness to to people who have on a bad mood

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people who are in a bad mood

'on seeing'应为'singing'；'to to'重复；'have on a bad mood'表达错误，应为'are in a bad mood'。

× when my friends feel sad because of an unfair exam result are usually seeing the cheerful songs to to help her relax and.

✓ When my friends feel sad because of an unfair exam result, they usually listen to cheerful songs to help them relax.

'friends'复数，代词应为'they'和'them'；'are usually seeing'错误，应为'usually listen to'；'to to'重复；句子缺少标点符号。