Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
I don't simply like singing. I adore it, although I'm not confident enough to perform before an audience. For me, singing is not just an art form, it's a way to set my soul free and drift into serenity, like a bird escaping the confines of its cage.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
The truth is, I never have, although I often wished I did. One of my dearest aspirations is to sing my favorite folklore songs, ideally while dressed in a traditional costume and performing the premiere spirited Russian folk dance to give the music in an authentic, vibrant flair.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
To be honest, I haven't settled on a specific audience yet. What truly captivates me is the thought of standing alone on a grand stage, pouring my heart out through song to a sea of unfamiliar faces.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
I believe it depends on the individual. While many find singing to be a source of joy and jubilation, other may not share the same sentiments. Singing release endorphins, the body's natural feel good hormones, which can elevate mood and foster happiness. However, not everyone experience singing as a choice.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 85.0제안: Your answer is expressive and uses vivid imagery, which is excellent. However, it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to keep your answers concise and directly related to the question, avoiding overly poetic language that might confuse the listener.
예시: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. Although I'm shy about performing in front of others, singing feels like a way to free my mind and find peace.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is detailed and imaginative, which is good. However, it is a bit long and contains some complex phrases that may affect clarity. Try to use simpler language and keep your answer within 4-5 sentences, focusing on the main point.
예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I wish I had. I would love to sing traditional folk songs while wearing a traditional costume and maybe even dance to make the performance more lively and authentic.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is honest and expressive, but it lacks specific details about the audience. Try to directly answer the question by naming a particular group or person you want to sing for, and then add supporting details with linking words to make your response clearer and more structured.
예시: I would like to sing for a large audience at a concert because sharing my music with many people would be exciting. Also, performing live helps me connect with others through my songs.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer shows understanding but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Also, the last sentence is unclear. Try to use simpler sentences, correct grammar, and provide clear examples or reasons to support your opinion.
예시: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it releases endorphins, which improve mood. However, some people may not enjoy singing or prefer other activities to feel happy.
문법
× other may not share the same sentiments.
✓ others may not share the same sentiments.
The subject 'other' is incorrect here because it refers to a singular noun, but the meaning requires a plural form 'others' to refer to other people. Using 'others' correctly matches the plural context of the sentence.
× Singing release endorphins, the body's natural feel good hormones, which can elevate mood and foster happiness.
✓ Singing releases endorphins, the body's natural feel-good hormones, which can elevate mood and foster happiness.
The verb 'release' does not agree with the singular subject 'Singing'. The correct third person singular form is 'releases'. Also, 'feel good' should be hyphenated as 'feel-good' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.
× However, not everyone experience singing as a choice.
✓ However, not everyone experiences singing as a choice.
The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verb must be in the third person singular form 'experiences' to maintain subject-verb agreement.
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