Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yeah, definitely. Singing is actually one of my favorite hobbies. I often go to karaokes with my friends and it is a regular thing for my weekends. Umm music really helps me release my stress.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
Yes, I had five years of choir experience, which improved my vocal skills a lot. I also studied vocal music with a professional vocalist for two years.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
Cool question, I would say nobody but myself. I'm not seeing for anyone but just to make myself happy. I just love music.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yeah, in fact, I am one of those people who gain happiness through music. Music is one of the essential parts of my life.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答自然且内容丰富，但存在口语填充词“Umm”，建议减少使用以提升表达流畅度。同时，回答中可以更具体地描述唱歌如何帮助释放压力。
예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions freely. For example, when I sing at karaoke with my friends on weekends, it helps me relax and forget about my daily stress.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 90.0제안: 回答结构清晰且内容具体，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时可以稍微扩展说明学习唱歌的具体收获。
예시: Yes, I had five years of choir experience, which greatly improved my vocal skills. Moreover, I studied vocal music with a professional vocalist for two years, which helped me master breathing techniques and pitch control.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够准确的问题，如“I'm not seeing for anyone”应改为“I don't sing for anyone”。建议注意语法准确性，并且回答可以更具体说明为什么只为自己唱歌。
예시: That's an interesting question. Actually, I usually sing just for myself because it makes me feel joyful and relaxed, rather than performing for others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答表达了观点，但缺少连接词和具体细节。建议增加连接词使表达更连贯，并举例说明唱歌如何带来快乐。
예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For instance, when I sing my favorite songs, it lifts my mood and helps me feel more positive throughout the day.
문법
× I often go to karaokes with my friends and it is a regular thing for my weekends.
✓ I often go to karaoke with my friends and it is a regular thing for my weekends.
“karaokes”是不可数名词，表示卡拉OK活动或场所，不能加复数-s。应使用单数形式“karaoke”。
× I'm not seeing for anyone but just to make myself happy.
✓ I'm not singing for anyone but just to make myself happy.
原句中“seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文谈论的是唱歌。这里是动词用错了，应该用“singing”表示“唱歌”。
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