Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for more natural flow. For example, instead of repeating 'I love singing', you could combine ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially spiritual songs, because they help me relax and release my frustration.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but is a bit long and slightly unclear due to sentence structure. Try to use linking words and clearer phrasing to improve coherence and naturalness.

예시: I took some music classes during my childhood, including compulsory ones at school, which helped me learn musical notes, but I wasn't very consistent in practicing.

제안: Good direct answer with supporting details. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and smoother linking words to connect your ideas naturally.

예시: I prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and relieve frustration. Moreover, I find it a great way to enjoy my leisure time.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but the sentence structure can be improved for better flow. Avoid short, choppy sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Honestly, I don't think anyone dislikes music because it brings joy to people of all ages. For example, even newborn babies are often sung to, which shows how universal and comforting music is.

× During my childhood days I've been to some music classes but I couldn't be consistent towards it and also there was compulsory music classes in my school time and it helped me learn some musical notes.

✓ During my childhood days I've been to some music classes but I couldn't be consistent with them and also there were compulsory music classes during my school time and they helped me learn some musical notes.

The phrase 'there was compulsory music classes' is incorrect because 'classes' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was'. Also, 'consistent towards it' is not idiomatic; 'consistent with them' is more appropriate when referring to classes. Additionally, 'school time' should be 'during my school time' for clarity and correctness.

× During my childhood days I've been to some music classes but I couldn't be consistent towards it and also there was compulsory music classes in my school time and it helped me learn some musical notes.

✓ During my childhood days I've been to some music classes but I couldn't be consistent with them and also there were compulsory music classes during my school time and they helped me learn some musical notes.

The pronouns referring to 'music classes' should be plural ('them' and 'they') to agree with the plural noun 'classes'. Using singular pronouns 'it' is incorrect here.

× During my childhood days I've been to some music classes but I couldn't be consistent towards it and also there was compulsory music classes in my school time and it helped me learn some musical notes.

✓ During my childhood days I've been to some music classes but I couldn't be consistent with them and also there were compulsory music classes during my school time and they helped me learn some musical notes.

The preposition 'towards' is not correct in this context. The correct preposition to express consistency with something is 'with'. Also, 'in my school time' should be 'during my school time' for proper temporal expression.