Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有些犹豫词（如“umm”）影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it brings me joy. Whenever I sing with my friends, I feel happy and excited.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“quite, not really”和“decide”时态错误。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致，并避免重复。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I was busy with my studies. But now, I have decided to find a teacher to learn singing.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“has really did a lot to me”，表达不够简洁。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达，同时避免重复。

예시: I would like to sing for my mom because she has done a lot for me. Singing a song for her is my way to show gratitude, although I sometimes feel shy.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, singing definitely brings happiness. When I sing, I feel relaxed and it helps me relieve stress.

× I think that maybe my mom because she has really did a lot to me and I think that I really could sing a song for her for gratitude.

✓ I think that maybe my mom because she has really done a lot for me and I think that I really could sing a song for her to show my gratitude.

这里的错误是动词时态使用错误。'has really did'中'did'是过去式，应该用过去分词'done'与助动词'have/has'连用构成现在完成时。建议使用'has really done'。另外，'a lot to me'应改为'a lot for me'，表示对某人做了很多事。最后，'for gratitude'应改为'to show my gratitude'，表达感谢的目的。

× No, quite, not really, because actually I'm very busy with my study and I didn't have the time to learn to study before, but now I have decide to try to find a teacher to teach me how to sing.

✓ No, quite, not really, because actually I'm very busy with my study and I didn't have the time to learn before, but now I have decided to try to find a teacher to teach me how to sing.

这里的错误是动词时态错误。'have decide'应为现在完成时，正确形式是'have decided'，即过去分词形式。'to learn to study'表达不清，应该简化为'to learn'。

× I think that maybe my mom because she has really did a lot to me and I think that I really could sing a song for her for gratitude.

✓ I think that maybe my mom because she has really done a lot for me and I think that I really could sing a song for her to show my gratitude.

介词使用错误，'did a lot to me'应改为'done a lot for me'，表示为某人做了很多事。'for gratitude'表达不准确，应该用'to show my gratitude'表示表达感谢的目的。

× Yes, I like singing because I think that's umm. It can bring me a feeling of joy and every time when I sing with my friends I will feel pretty happy and excited about it.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think that it can bring me a feeling of joy and every time when I sing with my friends, I feel pretty happy and excited about it.

句中'will feel'时态使用不当，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时'feel'。另外，'that's umm.'表达不完整，建议去掉或补充完整。

× So and your stressful circumstance, I will sing.

✓ So when you are in a stressful circumstance, I will sing.

句中缺少连接词，'and your stressful circumstance'表达不完整，应改为'when you are in a stressful circumstance'，表示条件状语。