Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with reasons. Avoid redundancy and incorrect word forms like 'musics'.

예시: No, I don't like singing because I have a terrible voice. However, I enjoy listening to music, which helps me relax.

제안: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with details. Avoid awkward phrases like 'dropped down it'.

예시: Yes, I used to try singing when I was a child, but because of my poor voice, I stopped learning.

제안: Your answer does not directly address the question. The question asks 'Who' you want to sing for, but you talk about music genres. Answer the question directly and then add details if needed.

예시: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me. Also, I prefer singing classical songs rather than rock songs.

제안: Your answer is too long and unclear with grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and keep sentences concise. Avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because music helps people relax. When we listen to or sing songs, it releases happy hormones, which improves our mood throughout the day.

× I always like to listen to the musics or.

✓ I always like to listen to music.

The word 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form. Using 'musics' is incorrect. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'or' which is incomplete. The correct sentence should be 'I always like to listen to music.'

× As in my childhood days, I remember that I likely to sing songs but due to my terrible voice I dropped down it.

✓ In my childhood days, I remember that I liked to sing songs but due to my terrible voice I gave it up.

The phrase 'I likely to sing' is incorrect; the past tense of 'like' is 'liked'. Also, 'dropped down it' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'gave it up' meaning to stop doing something. The sentence is corrected to reflect proper past tense usage and idiomatic expression.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

The pronoun 'who' is used as a subject, but here it is the object of the preposition 'for'. The correct object pronoun is 'whom'. However, in spoken English, 'who' is often used informally. For formal correctness, 'Whom do you want to sing for?' is appropriate.

× I often like to sing the songs like classical rather than the rock songs.

✓ I often like to sing songs like classical rather than rock songs.

The definite article 'the' before 'songs' and 'rock songs' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Also, 'classical' should be used as an adjective without 'the'. The corrected sentence removes unnecessary articles for proper generalization.

× Yes, I believe that it can be leads to a great happiness to the purpose because music is one of the relaxing options for the human beings and we listen to the music it will encourage our happy hormones and moreover it leads a good day for us while singing a song we are.

✓ Yes, I believe that it can lead to great happiness because music is one of the relaxing options for human beings. When we listen to music, it encourages our happy hormones and moreover, it leads to a good day for us while singing a song.

The phrase 'can be leads' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'can lead' is correct. 'A great happiness' is incorrect because 'happiness' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The sentence was also run-on and lacked proper punctuation. The correction fixes verb form, article usage, and sentence structure for clarity.