Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer deer iluu todorhoi, buren utgatai ug helj, holboo barij helj surah heregtei. Jishee ni, "I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I'm stressed, singing my favorite songs lifts my mood. Although I'm not very good, I like singing alone at home."

예시: I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I'm stressed, singing my favorite songs lifts my mood. Although I'm not very good at singing, I like to sing alone at home.

제안: Iluu todorhoi, buren utgatai ug helj, aldaa zohitsuulah heregtei. Jishee ni, "No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't see it as a professional skill. Also, I don't plan to learn singing in the future."

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't see it as a professional skill. Also, I don't plan to learn singing in the future.

제안: Iluu todorhoi, holboo barij, holbootoi ug helj surah heregtei. Jishee ni, "I usually sing only for myself because it relaxes me and lifts my mood. However, I get nervous when singing in front of others, so I avoid it."

예시: I usually sing only for myself because it relaxes me and lifts my mood. However, I get nervous when singing in front of others, so I avoid it.

제안: Iluu todorhoi, buren utgatai ug helj, holboo barij helj surah heregtei. Jishee ni, "Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. Not only singing but also listening to music or others singing can bring joy because songs sometimes relate to my feelings and make me comfortable."

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness. Not only singing but also listening to music or others singing can bring joy because songs sometimes relate to my feelings and make me comfortable.

× For example, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favorite song and slowly lifts up my mood.

✓ For example, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favorite song slowly lifts up my mood.

The sentence incorrectly includes 'and' which disrupts the verb phrase. The correct structure is 'singing my favorite song slowly lifts up my mood' without 'and'. This is a verb + -ing form issue because 'singing' is the subject performing the action.

× No, I've never learned how to sing because I've never seen singing as like a professional thing or anything.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing because I've never seen singing as a professional thing or anything.

The phrase 'as like' is incorrect; 'as' or 'like' should be used alone. Here, 'as' is appropriate. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× I don't really plan on learning thing in the future either.

✓ I don't really plan on learning things in the future either.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context of unspecified multiple items. This is a singular and plural issue.

× But when I sing in front of an audience in front of people, I tend to get really nervous and self-conscious so I try not to do it.

✓ But when I sing in front of an audience, I tend to get really nervous and self-conscious so I try not to do it.

The phrase 'in front of an audience in front of people' is redundant. Removing 'in front of people' improves clarity. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.