Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác ("scenes" thay vì "singing"). Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và dùng từ đúng ngữ cảnh.

예시: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day at work.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và câu không hoàn chỉnh như "anything class" và "how to sings". Hãy nói rõ ràng, sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và tránh tiếng ừ, à quá nhiều.

예시: No, I haven't taken any singing classes, but I have watched some tutorial videos on TikTok and YouTube that teach how to sing properly.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "seems alarmed" và "in front of my exceptions". Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Most of the time, I sing for myself because I feel shy singing in front of a crowd. I usually sing only in front of my close friends or family.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng, tránh lỗi như "singings" và "relieve artists". Hãy dùng câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress. For example, when people feel pressured at work, singing with friends or family can make them feel better.

× I really like scenes because I believe that it is an activity that helps me to relieve stress after a long day of work.

✓ I really like singing because I believe that it is an activity that helps me to relieve stress after a long day of work.

The word 'scenes' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'singing'. 'Scenes' is plural and unrelated to the context. Using the correct noun 'singing' fits the meaning and context of the sentence.

× Uh, I haven't gone to anything class, but I've watched some videos on TikTok or YouTube, uh, which guide people how to sings, uh, in right way.

✓ Uh, I haven't gone to any class, but I've watched some videos on TikTok or YouTube, uh, which guide people how to sing, uh, in the right way.

The phrase 'anything class' is incorrect; it should be 'any class' (quantifier issue). Also, 'how to sings' is wrong because after 'to' the base form of the verb is used, so 'sing' is correct. 'In right way' lacks the definite article 'the' before 'right way'. These corrections fix quantifier, verb form, and article errors.

× Well the most of the times I just think for myself because I feel very shy when I sing in front of the crowd.

✓ Well most of the time I just think for myself because I feel very shy when I sing in front of the crowd.

The phrase 'the most of the times' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'most of the time' (singular) when referring to frequency. This fixes the singular/plural issue.

× So I just seems alarmed or in front of my exceptions like my friends, my close friends or my family.

✓ So I just seem alarmed or in front of my exceptions like my friends, my close friends or my family.

The verb 'seems' does not agree with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'seem' for first person singular. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× I believe that happiness will come to people when they are singings because, for example, when they have a lot of stress or pressure from their work, so they can sing with friends or with family to relieve artists.

✓ I believe that happiness will come to people when they are singing because, for example, when they have a lot of stress or pressure from their work, they can sing with friends or with family to relieve stress.

The word 'singings' is incorrect; the correct form is 'singing' (present participle). Also, 'to relieve artists' is incorrect; it should be 'to relieve stress'. These fix verb form and word choice errors.