Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构有些断裂，建议使用连贯的句子表达原因和经历，避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and is a great leisure activity. My family and I often spend whole weekends singing together, which creates wonderful memories for us.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意冠词和单复数的使用。

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing online. Websites like YouTube have many teachers who teach singing, and I find these lessons very helpful for improving my skills.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议注意人称代词和时态的正确使用，同时使句子更流畅自然。

예시: I want to sing for my mother, who is a wonderful woman and has dedicated her life to her children. I really admire her, so if I have the chance, I would definitely sing a song for her.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误和语法问题，表达不够清晰，建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I am tired from work or school, I like to walk outside and listen to wonderful music, which helps me feel relaxed and happy.

× In our families.

✓ In our family.

这里的意思是指“我们家”，应使用单数形式“family”，而不是复数“families”。

× We spend a whole weekend to singing.

✓ We spend a whole weekend singing.

动词spend后应直接跟动名词形式，不能用不定式“to singing”，应改为“singing”。

× There's a online website like YouTube.

✓ There's an online website like YouTube.

以元音音素开头的单词前应使用不定冠词“an”，而不是“a”。

× There are many teacher online can tell you how to sing.

✓ There are many teachers online who can tell you how to sing.

“teacher”应使用复数形式“teachers”，且缺少关系代词“who”引导定语从句。

× I want to sing for my mother, who is wonderful woman, uh, dedicate his life to her child.

✓ I want to sing for my mother, who is a wonderful woman and dedicates her life to her child.

缺少冠词“a”，动词“dedicate”应改为第三人称单数“dedicates”，代词“his”应改为“her”，与“mother”保持一致。

× If I have chance to sing a song, I've definitely sing to her.

✓ If I have a chance to sing a song, I'll definitely sing to her.

缺少冠词“a”，条件句中应使用将来时态“will”，动词“sing”应用原形。

× Yes, I believe seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people.

“seeing”应为“singing”，原句为拼写错误。

× For example, when I tired of work or school, I walk across the street and then I listen to a wonderful music.

✓ For example, when I am tired of work or school, I walk across the street and then I listen to wonderful music.

“tired”前缺少助动词“am”，且“music”是不可数名词，前面不加冠词“a”。