Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yeah, of course I like singing because singing is made me happy in music, made me so excited when I was sad. Music can make me be better and I love sad song or happy song, but usually I like Olivia's song.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
I don't know, but I can say maybe never because like I bright that I can sit just like this. So I never learned how to sing song because I just act like Oh my God, this song is such easy or something. Maybe you don't know.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
When I was young, I want to sing for like my crash or like my mom. But I grew up so I don't want to sit for anyone. I just want to sing for me. Nobody can make me sing for his or she.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yeah, definitely. Umm, maybe. But some people doesn't like music 'cause they would find that annoyed. But most people like the music because music can make everyone happy. So I don't know.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使用更准确的时态和表达方式。
예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and lifts my mood when I'm sad. I like both sad and happy songs, but I especially enjoy songs by Olivia.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 30.0제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法混乱，缺乏逻辑性。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并提供具体细节。
예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. I usually just sing for fun and think some songs are easy to sing.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 40.0제안: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多，且句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和代词，表达清晰的观点。
예시: When I was young, I wanted to sing for my crush or my mom. But now, I prefer to sing for myself because singing is my personal enjoyment.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中存在矛盾和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议明确观点，使用连接词使回答更流畅。
예시: Yes, I definitely think singing can bring happiness to people. Although some may find music annoying, most people enjoy it because it can improve their mood and make them happy.
문법
× singing is made me happy in music, made me so excited when I was sad.
✓ singing made me happy with music, made me so excited when I was sad.
这里应该使用过去时态，因为描述的是过去的感受。原句中使用了“is made”，时态错误，应改为过去式“made”。
× singing is made me happy in music, made me so excited when I was sad.
✓ singing made me happy with music, made me so excited when I was sad.
介词使用错误，表达“因音乐而开心”应使用“with”而非“in”。
× I love sad song or happy song, but usually I like Olivia's song.
✓ I love sad songs or happy songs, but usually I like Olivia's songs.
名词复数形式错误，应该用复数形式“songs”表示多首歌曲。
× I love sad song or happy song, but usually I like Olivia's song.
✓ I love sad songs or happy songs, but usually I like Olivia's songs.
“song”应为复数形式“songs”，因为表达的是多首歌曲。
× I just act like Oh my God, this song is such easy or something.
✓ I just acted like Oh my God, this song is so easy or something.
描述过去行为，动词应使用过去式“acted”。
× this song is such easy or something.
✓ this song is so easy or something.
“such”用于修饰名词，修饰形容词时应使用“so”。
× When I was young, I want to sing for like my crash or like my mom.
✓ When I was young, I wanted to sing for my crush or my mom.
描述过去的愿望，动词应使用过去式“wanted”。
× I just want to sing for me. Nobody can make me sing for his or she.
✓ I just want to sing for myself. Nobody can make me sing for him or her.
反身代词使用错误，应使用“myself”；人称代词错误，应使用宾格“him or her”。
× some people doesn't like music 'cause they would find that annoyed.
✓ some people don't like music because they find it annoying.
主谓不一致，“people”是复数，谓语应为“don't”；“annoyed”应改为形容词“annoying”修饰“it”。
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