Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“raise me very well”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免使用模糊词汇如“and so on”。

예시: Actually, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it. However, I enjoy playing musical instruments, such as the piano, which makes me feel happy.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“haven't learn”应为“haven't learned”，以及“learn to how to playing”结构错误。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，并使句子更简洁自然。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm too shy to sing in front of others. However, I have learned to play the piano, and I play it quite well.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“are always support”应为“always support”。建议使用更连贯的句子结构，并增加细节使回答更具体。

예시: I want to sing for my parents because they always support and encourage me. When we get together, singing with my family makes me very happy.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误（seeing应为 singing），语法错误和表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和语法，表达更清楚的观点。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. When someone feels sad, singing can help them feel better and happier.

× However, I enjoy playing instruments which can raise me very well, for example piano and so on.

✓ However, I enjoy playing instruments which can raise me very well, for example, the piano and so on.

此句中“for example piano and so on”缺少冠词“the”，应为“for example, the piano and so on”，以符合英语习惯。

× No, I haven't learn how to sing because I'm too shy to sing in front of others.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I'm too shy to sing in front of others.

“haven't”后应接过去分词，动词“learn”的过去分词是“learned”，而非“learn”。

× However, I learn to how to playing instrument.

✓ However, I learn how to play instruments.

“learn to how to playing”结构错误，应为“learn how to play”，即动词不定式“to play”或“how to play”，且“instrument”应为复数“instruments”。

× However, I learn to how to playing instrument.

✓ However, I learn how to play instruments.

“instrument”应使用复数形式“instruments”，因为通常指多种乐器。

× For example the piano, I play it very well.

✓ For example, the piano, I play it very well.

“For example”后应加逗号，且“the piano”前应有定冠词“the”，此处已正确，但缺少逗号。

× I want to sing for my parents who are always support and encourage me when I sing.

✓ I want to sing for my parents who always support and encourage me when I sing.

“who are always support”中“support”应为动词原形，且“are”多余，应去掉。

× I think when we get together we can sing happily with my family.

✓ I think when we get together, we can sing happily with my family.

句中缺少逗号，增加逗号使句子更通顺。

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people.

“seeing”应为“singing”，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。

× When something feel not good at he or she will sing for herself, He will become more happier than before.

✓ When someone feels not good, he or she will sing for himself or herself. He will become happier than before.

“something”应为“someone”，“feel”应为“feels”，“not good at”表达不当，应简化为“not good”；“herself”应根据性别改为“himself or herself”；“more happier”是比较级错误，应为“happier”。