Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如将'singing'误说成'saying'，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意动词的正确使用，简洁明了地表达观点，并避免冗长。

예시: Yes, I really like singing because I have dreamed of becoming a singer since I was a child. I usually practice singing and often perform at my school.

제안: 回答缺乏连贯性和具体细节，重复使用'yeah'显得不自然。建议使用连词连接句子，丰富内容，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing Arabic songs because I enjoy them a lot. Therefore, I practice regularly to improve my skills.

제안: 回答中填充词较多，影响流畅度。建议减少犹豫词，直接回答问题，并用连接词丰富句子。

예시: I want to sing for my friends, parents, and teachers because I love them very much and want to express my feelings through music.

제안: 回答中多处语法错误，如将'singing'误说成'seeing'，句子结构混乱。建议注意词汇准确性，简洁表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

예시: Of course, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Every song carries emotions, and by singing, I want to share these feelings to make the audience happy.

× Yes, I really like saying it because when I was a child I wish I could be a singer when I grew up, so I usually practice singing and I often performed at my school.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because when I was a child I wished I could be a singer when I grew up, so I usually practiced singing and I often performed at my school.

句中“wish”表示过去的愿望，应该用过去式“wished”；“practice”与“performed”时态不一致，前者应改为过去式“practiced”以保持时态一致。

× Yeah, I learned how to sing Arabic.

✓ Yeah, I learned how to sing in Arabic.

动词“sing”后面表示语言时，需加介词“in”，表示“用阿拉伯语唱歌”。

× Of course I think seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Of course I think singing can bring happiness to people.

原句中“seeing”应为“singing”，是拼写错误，导致词义错误。

× I think seeing is a happiness scene for me and many every song have an emotion on it and I want to say that to bring the happiness to people, to audience.

✓ I think singing is a happy scene for me and many songs have emotion in them and I want to say that to bring happiness to people, to the audience.

“seeing”应为“singing”；“happiness scene”表达不当，改为“happy scene”；“many every song”结构错误，改为“many songs”；“have an emotion on it”应为“have emotion in them”；“the happiness”前不需要冠词，且“to audience”应加定冠词“the audience”。