Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Definitely yes I like to sing especially when I'm shower. When I'm singing I can feel more relaxed and I can loudly to sing what I love the song.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No, I have never learned how to sing, but in my future I want to try and learn about singing lessons and I want to learn more singing skills and improve my voice.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
I have seen for my mother because I love to singing at home and I like to use my guitar and sing to my family.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Definitely, yes. I think singing can bring happiness to people because most of people are stressed of their busy lifestyle when they think they can relax, that they can feel more happy.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 65.0제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的情感，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些句子结构不完整。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，避免语法错误。
예시: Yes, I definitely like singing, especially when I'm in the shower. Singing helps me feel relaxed and I enjoy singing my favorite songs loudly.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答内容清晰，但句子较长且重复“learn”一词，建议使用更简洁的表达并丰富词汇。
예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I hope to learn singing skills in the future to improve my voice.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议注意动词时态和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。
예시: I want to sing for my mother because I enjoy singing at home. I also like playing the guitar and singing for my family.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构混乱，语法错误较多。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Definitely. I think singing can bring happiness because many people feel stressed due to their busy lives, and singing helps them relax and feel happier.
문법
× Definitely yes I like to sing especially when I'm shower.
✓ Definitely yes, I like to sing especially when I'm showering.
这里动词'shower'需要用现在分词形式'showering'，表示正在进行的动作。
× I can loudly to sing what I love the song.
✓ I can sing loudly the songs I love.
副词'loudly'的位置不正确，应放在动词'sing'后面，且不需要不定式'to'。
× but in my future I want to try and learn about singing lessons and I want to learn more singing skills and improve my voice.
✓ but in the future, I want to try and take singing lessons, and I want to learn more singing skills and improve my voice.
表达未来时，通常用'the future'而不是'my future'，且'learn about singing lessons'不自然，改为'take singing lessons'更合适。
× I have seen for my mother because I love to singing at home and I like to use my guitar and sing to my family.
✓ I have sung for my mother because I love singing at home and I like to use my guitar and sing to my family.
'have seen for'错误，应为'have sung for'，表示为某人唱歌；'love to singing'应为'love singing'，动词后接动名词。
× I think singing can bring happiness to people because most of people are stressed of their busy lifestyle when they think they can relax, that they can feel more happy.
✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because most people are stressed by their busy lifestyle, and when they think about it, they can relax and feel happier.
'stressed of'应为'stressed by'；'most of people'应为'most people'；'feel more happy'应为'feel happier'，形容词比较级。
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