Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和语义不清的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免语法错误，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

예시: I don't really enjoy singing because I'm not confident in my voice. For example, I feel embarrassed when I sing in front of others because I worry they might judge me, so I usually avoid singing in public.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，且内容重复。建议直接回答问题，结构清晰，避免重复，并用恰当的词汇表达原因。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I lack confidence in my singing abilities. Therefore, I usually avoid singing in public and have never taken any classes to improve.

제안: 回答表达不清且有语法错误。建议先直接回答问题，然后用连贯的句子说明原因和未来的可能性。

예시: I usually avoid singing in front of others because I feel nervous and self-conscious. However, if I improve in the future, I might consider singing for close friends or family.

제안: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但有些口语化词汇和重复。建议使用更正式的表达，避免口头语，使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music helps us relax and escape daily stress. For example, when I listen to my favorite singer, Lijiang, his songs always make me feel calm and uplifted.

× Why I don't really enjoy saying because I'm not very confident in my voice.

✓ I don't really enjoy singing because I'm not very confident in my voice.

句子结构错误，疑问词'Why'用在陈述句中不合适，应去掉。正确表达是直接陈述原因。

× I don't really enjoy saying because I'm not very confident in my voice.

✓ I don't really enjoy singing because I'm not very confident in my voice.

动词'enjoy'后应接动名词形式，'saying'应改为'singing'。

× You know I because I lacked confidence in my sing abilities.

✓ You know I lacked confidence in my singing abilities.

动词'lack'后接名词，'sing'应改为动名词'singing'作定语修饰'abilities'。

× So I usually avoid staying in public.

✓ So I usually avoid singing in public.

动词'avoid'后应接动名词，'staying'不符合语境，应改为'singing'。

× So I prefer to keep it priority because I feel a bit shy about my voice and I was never taking anything classes to improve.

✓ So I prefer to keep it private because I feel a bit shy about my voice and I have never taken any classes to improve.

'keep it priority'表达错误，应为'keep it private'表示保密；'was never taking'时态错误，应为现在完成时'have never taken'；'anything classes'搭配错误，应为'any classes'。

× Well I usually like confidence in my same ability so I try to avoid staying in public or in front of other people because this I probably won't want to sing for anyone so I feel quite nervous and self-conscious.

✓ Well I usually lack confidence in my singing ability so I try to avoid singing in public or in front of other people because of this I probably won't want to sing for anyone so I feel quite nervous and self-conscious.

'like confidence in my same ability'表达不当，应为'lack confidence in my singing ability'；'avoid staying in public'应为'avoid singing in public'；'because this'应为'because of this'。

× Maybe in the future if I improved I may consider seeing for close friends or family.

✓ Maybe in the future if I improve I may consider singing for close friends or family.

'improved'时态错误，应为现在时条件句中的'improve'；'seeing'应为'singing'。