Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有些表达不准确，如“blow up steam”应为“blow off steam”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更地道的表达。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing in my free time because it helps me relax and relieve stress. For example, I often go to karaoke with friends to have fun and forget about my worries.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱，语法错误较多，且缺少连贯的结构。建议练习用简单句表达经历，并注意语法和逻辑连贯。

예시: Yes, I learned singing in primary school during music classes. Although I found it difficult at first and felt embarrassed, it was a valuable experience that helped me improve.

제안: 回答中有重复和不连贯的表达，如“big tongue thief”不明确。建议用更准确的词汇表达害羞或紧张的情绪，并保持句子简洁。

예시: I would like to sing for my crush to get his attention, but I feel shy and nervous, so I haven't done it yet. Maybe in the future, if I feel more confident, I will try.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语言不够准确，如“seeing it like a magic”应改为“it's like magic”。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to many people. It's like magic because it helps us forget daily stress and express our emotions freely.

× It is a quite good way for me to blow up steam, especially when I was quite stressful.

✓ It is quite a good way for me to blow off steam, especially when I was quite stressed.

这里的 'stressful' 是形容词，意思是“令人感到压力的”，而句子想表达的是“我感到压力”，应该用过去分词 'stressed' 来表示状态。并且 'blow up steam' 是错误搭配，正确表达是 'blow off steam'，意为“发泄情绪”。

× how to say I I I was quite sad that time 'cause I was totally I am a big tongue Dave.

✓ how to sing and how to say, I was quite sad that time because I was totally a big tongue-tied guy.

原句中 'I I I' 重复且无意义，且 'I am a big tongue Dave' 语法和表达错误，正确表达应为 'a big tongue-tied guy'，表示“我很笨口拙舌”。另外，'cause' 应写为 'because' 以正式表达。

× You want to sing for Oh well I I am eager to sing for my crush you know I just want to draw his attention and get closer to him.

✓ Who do you want to sing for? Oh well, I am eager to sing for my crush, you know. I just want to draw his attention and get closer to him.

原句缺少疑问句的主语和谓语，且 'You want to sing for' 应为 'Who do you want to sing for?'。另外，句子中 'I I' 重复，应去掉多余的 'I'。

× Maybe in the future after he fall in love with me I would do that.

✓ Maybe in the future after he falls in love with me, I will do that.

这里 'fall' 应用第三人称单数形式 'falls'，因为主语是 'he'。另外，表达未来时应使用 'will' 而非 'would'，因为这里是对未来的预测或计划。

× I think this many people have the same feeling as me, seeing it like a magic.

✓ I think many people have the same feeling as me, seeing it like magic.

'this many people' 是错误搭配，应去掉 'this'。'like a magic' 中 'magic' 是不可数名词，前面不加冠词 'a'。

× people can express their emotion and escape the stress from singing.

✓ people can express their emotions and escape the stress of singing.

'emotion' 应为复数 'emotions'，因为人们表达多种情感。'escape the stress from singing' 中 'from' 用法不当，正确搭配是 'escape the stress of singing'。