Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'embers' thay vì 'embarrassed' và 'selfish' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể rút gọn để tránh lặp lại ý.

예시: I don't really enjoy singing because I often feel embarrassed when I sing in front of others. Instead, I prefer listening to music as it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy listening to Vietnamese pop songs while studying or resting.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in grade 8 or 9 because it was part of the school curriculum. However, I didn't realize it was formal singing lessons at that time.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'swing my singing'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

예시: Although I don't like singing very much, I would like to sing for my family because they always support me and enjoy my singing.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, nhiều từ không phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rối rắm khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu đơn giản để truyền đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it creates unforgettable memories and helps people feel closer to each other, strengthening social bonds.

× I don't really enjoy singing since I often feel shy and embers when I sing in front of others.

✓ I don't really enjoy singing since I often feel shy and embarrassed when I sing in front of others.

The word 'embers' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'embarrassed' to describe feeling shy or self-conscious.

× I prefer listening to music since it helps me to unwind and I can enjoy the songs without feeling selfish.

✓ I prefer listening to music since it helps me to unwind and I can enjoy the songs without feeling self-conscious.

The word 'selfish' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'self-conscious' to express feeling uneasy or embarrassed.

× Well, at an early age as my memory served me right in the grade 8 or 9 students have to learn how to sing in their which one of their subjects, but I don't realize it.

✓ Well, at an early age, as my memory serves me right, in grade 8 or 9, students had to learn how to sing as one of their subjects, but I didn't realize it.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'served' should be 'serves' for present tense memory recall; 'have to' should be 'had to' for past obligation; 'don't realize' should be 'didn't realize' for past negation.

× Well, at an early age as my memory served me right in the grade 8 or 9 students have to learn how to sing in their which one of their subjects, but I don't realize it.

✓ Well, at an early age, as my memory serves me right, in grade 8 or 9, students had to learn how to sing as one of their subjects, but I didn't realize it.

The phrase 'in their which one of their subjects' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'as one of their subjects' to correctly express the meaning.

× Uh, I do not like singing pretty much but I would like to sing for my family since they always support me and enjoy my swing my singing.

✓ Uh, I do not like singing very much but I would like to sing for my family since they always support me and enjoy my singing.

The phrase 'pretty much' is informal and less appropriate here; 'very much' is better. Also, 'swing my singing' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy my singing'.

× Oh, actually seeing flyer in our essential life, then it can generate memories, unforgettable events that can shorten our relationship distance and create more social goal.

✓ Oh, actually singing is a vital part of our essential life; it can generate memories and unforgettable events that can shorten the distance in our relationships and create more social goals.

The word 'seeing flyer' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. Also, 'relationship distance' should be 'distance in our relationships', and 'social goal' should be plural 'social goals' for correct meaning.