Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言较自然，但存在语法和表达上的小错误，如“hip hop musics”应为“hip hop music”，“although I'm not good at keeping the tune”表达稍显笨拙。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，且句子结构更简洁。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress, even though I'm not very good at keeping the tune. I especially like American hip hop music because it has catchy rhythms and interesting lyrics. Singing also helps me improve my English pronunciation.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“sappler”应为“sampler”或“beginner”，且句子连接不够流畅。建议使用恰当词汇，避免重复连接词，提升表达连贯性。

예시: I haven't formally learned how to sing, but I often watch tutorials on TikTok to improve my skills. Although I'm still a beginner, I enjoy practicing singing casually in my free time.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构较好，但有语法错误，如“which is I really admire”应为“whom I really admire”。建议注意关系代词的正确使用，使表达更准确。

예시: I would like to sing for my favorite singer, Luhan. He used to be an idol in South Korea and now he's both a singer and an actor, whom I really admire. I know all his songs very well, so it would be a great honor to perform for him.

제안: 回答中表达不够准确，如“they might not pretty much happiness”语法错误且意义不清。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Actually, it depends on the type of songs people sing. If people are sad or serious, singing might not bring them much happiness. However, happy and lively songs can definitely make people feel joyful and lift their mood.

× I like singing like hip hop musics, especially American ones because they have catchy rhythms and interesting lyrics.

✓ I like singing hip hop music, especially American ones because they have catchy rhythms and interesting lyrics.

“musics”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应该用单数形式“music”。

× Although I'm still a sappler but I enjoy practicing singing casually in my free time.

✓ Although I'm still a sappler, I enjoy practicing singing casually in my free time.

“Although”和“but”不能同时使用，二者都是转折连词，使用其中一个即可。

× He used to be the idol in South Korea and now he's both a singer and an actor, which is I really admire.

✓ He used to be the idol in South Korea and now he's both a singer and an actor, which I really admire.

“which is I really admire”中“is”多余，正确表达应为“which I really admire”。

× If the people are sad or serious, they might not pretty much happiness.

✓ If the people are sad or serious, they might not feel much happiness.

“pretty much happiness”用法错误，应该用“feel much happiness”来表达“感受到很多幸福”的意思。