Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và có liên kết logic.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions. I started learning singing when I was a child since my mother loves music, and I inherited her passion. Singing also helps me relax and feel happy.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc. Hãy nói rõ thời gian và cách bạn học hát.

예시: Yes, I started learning how to sing when I was five years old at school with my music teacher. Later, as I grew up, I practiced singing by watching tutorials on the Internet.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy giải thích lý do bạn muốn hát cho mọi người một cách cụ thể.

예시: I want to sing for everyone because I am confident in my voice. Sharing my favorite songs with others makes me happy and I hope it can bring joy to them as well.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và giải thích cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc hát đối với sức khỏe và tinh thần.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it positively affects both our health and mind. Singing can reduce stress and improve our mood, making people feel more joyful.

× I really really like singing and I study singing when I was a child because my mom very like music and me too.

✓ I really really like singing and I studied singing when I was a child because my mom really liked music and me too.

The sentence mixes present tense 'study' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. The verb should be in past tense 'studied' to match the time frame. Also, 'very like' is incorrect; it should be 'really liked' to express degree of liking in past tense.

× I really really like singing and I study singing when I was a child because my mom very like music and me too.

✓ I really really like singing and I studied singing when I was a child because my mom really liked music and I did too.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the subject of the clause; it should be 'I' to maintain subject form. Also, 'too' should be preceded by 'did' to complete the verb phrase.

× When I five years old, I learn singing in my school with my my my with my music teacher.

✓ When I was five years old, I learned singing in my school with my music teacher.

The phrase 'When I five years old' lacks the verb 'was' to form the past tense. 'Learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past time frame. Repetition of 'my' is a mistake and should be removed.

× When I five years old, I learn singing in my school with my my my with my music teacher.

✓ When I was five years old, I learned singing at my school with my music teacher.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate than 'at' when referring to attending school. Also, repeated 'my' is an error and should be removed.

× But when I grow up I singing on Internet Internet.

✓ But when I grew up, I sang on the Internet.

The phrase 'when I grow up' refers to past time, so 'grow' should be in past tense 'grew'. 'I singing' is incorrect; it should be 'I sang' to indicate past action. 'Internet' should be preceded by 'the' as a definite article.

× But when I grow up I singing on Internet Internet.

✓ But when I grew up, I sang on the Internet.

The preposition 'on' is correct for 'Internet', but 'Internet' should be preceded by the definite article 'the'.

× I want to sing for every or for everyone because because I'm so confident with my voice and I want to sing singing for everyone to with my with my favorite song, yes.

✓ I want to sing for everyone because I'm so confident with my voice and I want to sing my favorite songs for everyone, yes.

The phrase 'every or for everyone' is redundant; 'everyone' alone is sufficient. 'Sing singing' is incorrect; only 'sing' is needed. 'To with my with my favorite song' is unclear and should be corrected to 'my favorite songs'. Repetition of 'with my' is an error.

× I want to sing for every or for everyone because because I'm so confident with my voice and I want to sing singing for everyone to with my with my favorite song, yes.

✓ I want to sing for everyone because I'm so confident in my voice and I want to sing my favorite songs for everyone, yes.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect when expressing confidence; 'confident in' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, sure, because singing is a singing have influence, impulsive influence from my health, my brain, yes and.

✓ Yes, sure, because singing has an influence, a positive influence on my health and my brain.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Singing is a singing have influence' is incorrect; it should be 'singing has an influence'. 'Impulsive influence' is likely a mistake for 'positive influence'. The sentence should be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.