Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在发音错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），且句子结构有些重复和不够流畅。建议注意发音准确，避免重复词汇，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing even though I'm not very skilled at it. Singing helps me relax and unwind after a busy day. For instance, I often sing my favorite songs to relieve stress and boost my mood.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议简化句子，注意时态和语法，使用连接词使表达更清晰。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I like to watch videos on TikTok to learn some singing techniques from musicians.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，句子断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议练习完整表达观点，避免重复，使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: Actually, I'm not proud of my singing because I don't think I'm very good at it. Therefore, I prefer to sing to myself, for example, when I am taking a shower to relieve stress.

제안: 回答表达了观点和例子，但存在发音错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），句子结构稍显简单。建议注意发音，尝试使用更多丰富的词汇和连接词。

예시: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. For me, after a busy day, I like to play my favorite songs and sing along, which helps me feel joyful and relaxed.

× I really enjoy seeing even though I'm not good at it.

✓ I really enjoy singing even though I'm not good at it.

动词enjoy后应接动名词形式，seeing是动词see的现在分词，语义不符，应改为singing。

× sing my favorite song to like relieve stress and improve my mood.

✓ sing my favorite song to relieve stress and improve my mood.

to后面直接接动词原形表示目的，like在此多余，应删除。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

learn的过去分词在美式英语中为learned，learnt为英式用法，需根据语境统一。

× I would say no I have never learned how to sing and go to lessons but I always like browse some videos or Tiktok and learn some musicians learn some singing skills from.

✓ I would say no. I have never learned how to sing or gone to lessons, but I always like to browse some videos on TikTok and learn some singing skills from musicians.

句子结构混乱，缺少标点，动词形式错误，需拆分句子并调整动词形式和介词使用。

× learn some musicians learn some singing skills from.

✓ learn some singing skills from musicians.

介词from应放在learn后面，且musicians应放在from后，语序错误。

× Actually, I'm not proud of my saying because personally I think I'm.

✓ Actually, I'm not proud of my singing because personally I think I'm not good at it.

my saying应为my singing，且句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× I always sing when I am taking shower to relieve my stress that.

✓ I always sing when I am taking a shower to relieve my stress.

taking shower前缺少冠词a，that多余，应删除。

× Like for me, seeing can bring happiness to me.

✓ Like for me, singing can bring happiness to me.

seeing应为singing，语义错误。

× I will like play my favorite song and sing along with it.

✓ I will like to play my favorite song and sing along with it.

like后应接不定式to play，而非直接接动词原形。