Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to connect with the music and understand the emotions behind the lyrics. Singing helps me express my feelings and appreciate the singer's message.

제안: 回答内容简单且重复，缺乏连贯性。建议直接回答问题后，补充具体细节，避免重复表达。

예시: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons because I don't consider myself very talented. I usually just sing alone at home for fun and to relax.

제안: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达含糊。建议明确回答对象，并用具体理由支持，句子要简洁连贯。

예시: I usually sing for myself because songs often have meanings that resonate with me. Singing helps me feel comforted and express my emotions.

제안: 回答较好，但句子较长且有些重复。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连词使表达更流畅。

예시: Definitely yes. Singing can connect with people's hearts and help them express their feelings. It also allows people to share emotions and feel understood, which brings happiness.

× Maybe it's meaningful and it's charming so I can know more about what they are trying to say when I'm seeing because I know the lyrics which help me express my feeling or know more about the singers feeling.

✓ Maybe it's meaningful and charming, so I can know more about what they are trying to say when I'm singing because I know the lyrics which help me express my feelings or know more about the singer's feelings.

这里的“seeing”用错了，现在分词形式应为“singing”，因为句子想表达的是“当我唱歌时”。此外，“feeling”应为复数“feelings”，表示多种感受；“singers feeling”应为“singer's feelings”，表示单个歌手的感受，需加所有格。

× I just sing in my house.

✓ I just sing at my house.

英语中表示在某人家中通常用介词“at”而非“in”，所以应改为“at my house”。

× In my home, I just sing alone and just play with the music.

✓ At my home, I just sing alone and just play with the music.

同上，表示在家时用“at”更合适。

× It always come out with a reason, maybe the meanings or the lyrics makes me feel comfortable or meaningful.

✓ It always comes out with a reason, maybe the meanings or the lyrics make me feel comfortable or meaningful.

主语“It”是单数，谓语动词应为“comes”；后半句“meanings or the lyrics”是复数，谓语动词应为“make”。

× Maybe the music or the lyrics maybe can connect with your own heart and then you can express your feelings toward this song and know more about what other people sing.

✓ Maybe the music or the lyrics can connect to your own heart and then you can express your feelings toward this song and know more about what other people sing.

动词“connect”后通常搭配介词“to”表示连接到某物，而非“with”。

× Maybe they have the same feelings with you and it makes you happy to express your own feelings and without concern.

✓ Maybe they have the same feelings as you and it makes you happy to express your own feelings without concern.

表达“有相同的感受”时，介词应为“as”而非“with”；“and without concern”前不应有“and”，应直接连接。