Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，增加连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I don't really enjoy singing because I believe it requires natural talent. For example, I often feel embarrassed when singing in front of others because I might lose my voice or forget the lyrics.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用完整句子说明情况。

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, in primary school, we had singing tests where music teachers asked students to sing simple songs to assess their talent.

제안: 回答非常不连贯，语法和表达错误严重，难以理解。建议先理清思路，用完整句子表达清楚想法。

예시: I would like to sing for my parents and grandparents because they are more tolerant of my voice and support me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不够准确。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, it can release chemicals like dopamine in the brain, which make people feel happy and relaxed. Personally, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and improve my mood.

× Not really. I don't enjoy singing because I think I like the natural talent for it.

✓ Not really. I don't enjoy singing because I think I lack the natural talent for it.

句子结构不完整，原句中"I think I like the natural talent"意思不通，应该是表达“我觉得我没有天赋”，需要改为"I think I lack the natural talent"。

× Which makes me feel really embarrassed when I have to sing.

✓ This makes me feel really embarrassed when I have to sing.

句子以关系代词"Which"开头，缺少先行词，导致句子结构不完整，应改为"This"指代前文内容，使句子完整。

× In front of others, for example, I often lose my voice or forget lyrics, so I prefer to avoid.

✓ In front of others, for example, I often lose my voice or forget lyrics, so I prefer to avoid singing.

句子缺少宾语，"prefer to avoid"后应接动名词或名词，补充"singing"使句子完整。

× Actually, we have like a test in the primary schools and the musical teachers will let all.

✓ Actually, we have a test in primary schools and the music teachers will let everyone participate.

"like a test"中"like"用法不当，应去掉；"musical teachers"应为"music teachers"；"let all"不完整，应补充"everyone participate"。

× It takes a lot student to sing.

✓ It takes a lot of students to sing.

"a lot student"缺少复数形式和介词"of"，应改为"a lot of students"。

× A simple lyrics and to tell who is more talented in music.

✓ They sing simple lyrics to show who is more talented in music.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整句子。

× I would probably say because I want.

✓ I would probably say no because I don't want to.

句子不完整，缺少主要信息，需补充完整表达。

× People who can bear. My. The, my saying so, my parents and my grandparents, they are.

✓ People who can bear my singing, like my parents and my grandparents, they are tolerant.

句子断裂且代词使用混乱，需重新组织句子使其通顺。

× They have. A much better tolerance of mine. Voice.

✓ They have a much better tolerance of my voice.

形容词和名词顺序错误，应为"tolerance of my voice"。

× Yes, I believe thinking and bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people.

句子缺少主语和谓语，表达不完整，应补充完整。

× For example, when people say they, their brain release chemicals like dopamine, which make them feel drawing poor and relaxed.

✓ For example, when people sing, their brains release chemicals like dopamine, which make them feel happy and relaxed.

"say they"用词错误，应为"sing"；"brain"应为复数"brains"；"drawing poor"无意义，应为"happy"。

× Personally, I also enjoy singing because it helped me relieve stress and improve my mood.

✓ Personally, I also enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress and improve my mood.

时态不一致，前半句为现在时，后半句不应用过去时，应统一为现在时。