Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки, что снижает его естественность и эффективность. Постарайтесь формулировать предложения более чётко и избегать избыточности.

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel calm and relaxed after a busy day.

제안: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и содержит много грамматических ошибок. Рекомендуется отвечать прямо на вопрос и использовать правильные времена и структуру предложений.

예시: Yes, I have taken singing lessons to improve my voice and enjoy music more.

제안: В ответе есть ошибки в словах и грамматике, а также неясность в выражении мысли. Следует использовать правильные слова и строить предложения логично.

예시: I would like to sing for Jennifer Lopez because I admire her talent and beautiful voice.

제안: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, а также избегать избыточности.

예시: Yes, singing makes me happy after a stressful day, and I believe it can bring joy to everyone.

× Yes, I like singing because it helps me make me feel calm and and quiet.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel calm and quiet.

The phrase 'helps me make me feel' is incorrect because 'make me' is unnecessary and redundant. The correct structure is 'helps me feel'. Also, there is a repeated word 'and and' which should be corrected to a single 'and'.

× I learned English thing because it helps me understood my English homework and understood English language and sometimes when I think English music.

✓ I learned English things because it helps me understand my English homework and understand the English language, and sometimes when I listen to English music.

The verb 'understood' is incorrectly used in the past tense where the base form 'understand' is needed after 'helps me'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. The phrase 'when I think English music' is incorrect; it should be 'when I listen to English music' to convey the intended meaning.

× I want to hurt a singing Jlo because this artist for me is really beautiful and her singing is really good.

✓ I want to hear Jlo singing because this artist, for me, is really beautiful and her singing is really good.

The verb 'hurt' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'hear'. Also, 'a singing Jlo' is awkward; it should be 'Jlo singing' to indicate listening to her sing.

× Yes, because when I started singing after a stressful day, it helps me make me feel happiness and I think it's useful for everyone.

✓ Yes, because when I start singing after a stressful day, it helps me feel happy and I think it's useful for everyone.

The phrase 'helps me make me feel happiness' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me feel happy'. Also, the tense should be present 'start' to match the general statement. 'Happiness' is a noun, but here an adjective 'happy' is appropriate after 'feel'.