Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有一些语法和用词错误，比如“saying”应为“singing”，“relaxable”应为“relaxed”。建议你使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复表达相同的意思。可以简洁明了地表达你的观点，并用具体的例子支持。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and lifts my mood. For example, when I feel stressed, I often sing my favorite songs to feel better.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“sing follow myself”应改为“sing by myself”。建议你用更准确的句子结构表达你的意思，并且避免重复。

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually sing by myself and try to imitate the styles of singers I like.

제안: 你的回答语法和表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议你用简单明了的句子表达你的想法，并且注意词汇的正确使用，比如“impress my thankful”应改为“express my gratitude”。

예시: I want to sing for my parents because it is a way to show my gratitude and love for them. I believe they would enjoy listening to me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，比如最后一句没有说完。建议你用完整的句子表达观点，并且避免使用不恰当的比喻。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I sing, I feel relaxed and joyful, almost like I am free from all worries.

× Yes I do, I like saying.

✓ Yes I do, I like singing.

动词 'like' 后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。'saying' 是 'say' 的动名词，但这里应使用 'singing'，表示喜欢唱歌。

× The reason why I like it is that singing can make me feel relaxable and also it can make me happy and joyful.

✓ The reason why I like it is that singing can make me feel relaxed and also it can make me happy and joyful.

'relaxable' 不是正确的形容词，正确的形容词是 'relaxed'，表示感到放松。

× I usually sing follow myself.

✓ I usually sing by myself.

动词 'sing' 后面接 'by myself' 表示独自唱歌，'follow myself' 用法错误。

× I like to mimic others singing methods but I never learn how to sing before.

✓ I like to mimic others' singing methods but I have never learned how to sing before.

表示过去经历时，应该用现在完成时 'have never learned'，且 'others' 应该加所有格 'others''。

× I want to sing for my parents because I think sing can impress my mind and I want to impress my thankful for my parents and I think they love love my scene.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because I think singing can impress my mind and I want to express my thanks to my parents and I think they love my singing.

'sing' 应改为动名词 'singing'；'impress my thankful' 结构错误，应改为 'express my thanks'；'love love my scene' 语义不清，改为 'love my singing' 更合适。

× I think things can bring happiness to people when I sing, I often feel comfortable and joyful.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people. When I sing, I often feel comfortable and joyful.

原句逗号连接两个独立句，造成句子结构错误，应分成两个句子。

× I like singing like a bird on a tree and I think when I sing I'm very free and.

✓ I like singing like a bird on a tree and I think when I sing I'm very free.

句子末尾 'and' 后无内容，造成句子不完整，应去掉 'and'。