Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, чтобы ясно выразить свои мысли. Также избегайте лишних слов и старайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя связующие слова для логичности.

예시: I used to love singing when I was a child because it was my passion. However, nowadays I am not very interested in singing anymore.

제안: Ответ прерывается и содержит много пауз и неуверенности. Рекомендуется строить предложения более связно, использовать связующие слова и завершать мысли. Также добавьте конкретные детали о вашем опыте.

예시: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. I attended a music school where I improved my skills and made many good friends, which made the experience very enjoyable.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется использовать правильные предлоги и избегать повторов. Также добавьте конкретные причины, почему вы хотите петь для них.

예시: I would like to sing for my grandparents because they enjoy music a lot, and I want to make them happy by performing songs they love.

제안: Ответ достаточно хороший, но можно улучшить связность и точность выражений. Используйте более подходящие слова и связывайте предложения логически. Также избегайте тавтологии.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, many people in Kazakhstan enjoy listening to traditional music because it is fascinating and beautiful, which shows their passion for it.

× Well, nowadays I don't really interesting interested in singing because but when I was a child, I think that is it was my passion because for example, I really like to, I really want to. Went to.

✓ Well, nowadays I am not really interested in singing because when I was a child, I think it was my passion. For example, I really liked to, I really wanted to go.

The phrase 'I don't really interesting interested' is incorrect because 'interesting' is an adjective and 'interested' is the correct past participle form used with 'am/is/are'. The correct form is 'I am not really interested'. Also, 'Went to' is incomplete and should be 'go' or 'go to' depending on context. The sentence is corrected to use proper verb forms and sentence structure.

× Well, nowadays I don't really interesting interested in singing because but when I was a child, I think that is it was my passion because for example, I really like to, I really want to. Went to.

✓ Well, nowadays I am not really interested in singing because when I was a child, I thought it was my passion. For example, I really liked to, I really wanted to go.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I think that is it was my passion' should be 'I thought it was my passion' to maintain past tense consistency when referring to childhood.

× I went to music school and I think it was the best experience in my life because, uh, in this time I found a lot of friends and they were really.

✓ I went to music school and I think it was the best experience of my life because, at that time, I found a lot of friends and they were really nice.

The phrase 'in this time' is incorrect; it should be 'at that time' to refer to a past period. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; adding 'nice' or another adjective completes the thought.

× I really like to think for my grandparents because they really like some kind of singers, for example, and I really, I really want to make them happy.

✓ I really like to sing for my grandparents because they really like some kinds of singers, for example, and I really want to make them happy.

The phrase 'think for my grandparents' is incorrect; it should be 'sing for my grandparents'. Also, 'some kind of singers' should be 'some kinds of singers' or 'some kinds of music' depending on meaning.

× some people in Kazakhstan really enjoy to listen traditional music because our music is very fascinating and very gorgeous.

✓ Some people in Kazakhstan really enjoy listening to traditional music because our music is very fascinating and very gorgeous.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('listening'), not an infinitive ('to listen'). Also, 'listen traditional music' requires the preposition 'to' after 'listening'.