Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。例如，'I really fond of singing' 应为 'I really like singing'。同时，避免使用模糊的词汇如 'thing'，应具体说明原因。

예시: I really like singing because it is a great way to express my emotions and helps me relax. Music is a universal art that everyone can enjoy freely.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以更具体地说明为什么唱歌有用。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I would love to because singing is a useful skill. It can make social gatherings more enjoyable and help people connect with each other.

제안: 你的回答结构较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意冠词和介词的使用，如 'a kind and supportive person' 和 'in front of her'。

예시: I'd love to sing for my mom because she is a kind and supportive person. She never judges me, which makes me feel confident when I sing in front of her. Singing for her always motivates me to do my best.

제안: 回答不够具体且表达不清晰，建议明确表达观点并使用恰当的词汇和句式。避免使用模糊词汇如 'thing'，并注意介词搭配。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people forget their worries and escape from reality for a while.

× I really fond of singing because thing is a good way to express my emotion and also is a simple way to help me loose me up.

✓ I really am fond of singing because it is a good way to express my emotions and also a simple way to help me loosen up.

句子中缺少动词“am”，导致结构不完整；“thing”应为“it”指代前文；“emotion”应为复数形式“emotions”；“loose me up”应为“loosen up”，loose是形容词，loosen是动词，表示放松。

× And the most important thing is music.

✓ And the most important thing is music.

该句无明显冠词错误，保持原句。

× Art is totally free, everyone can.

✓ Art is totally free; everyone can enjoy it.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整，需补充谓语动词使句子完整。

× Well, unfortunately no, but if I had the chance, I would love to learn something skill because singing is really useful in our daily life, especially when you play with each other or just hang out with each other, you can talk.

✓ Well, unfortunately no, but if I had the chance, I would love to learn some skills because singing is really useful in our daily life, especially when you play with each other or just hang out with each other, you can talk.

“something skill”搭配不当，应为“some skills”，表示一些技能。

× She never judged me which makes me feel confident when I sing in front her.

✓ She never judged me, which makes me feel confident when I sing in front of her.

“in front her”缺少介词“of”，正确表达为“in front of her”。

× Well, I guess maybe sometimes thing can temporarily help them get rid from the reality and the worries in the real life.

✓ Well, I guess maybe sometimes things can temporarily help them get rid of reality and worries in real life.

“thing”应为复数“things”；“get rid from”搭配错误，应为“get rid of”；“the reality”和“the worries”中“the”可省略，表达更自然。