Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'seeing' thay vì 'singing'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I love singing because it helps me reduce and release stress. For example, I often sing karaoke with my friends, which is really enjoyable.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'goes sing'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't think it's necessary. However, I often sing with my friends for fun and to relieve stress.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

예시: I usually like to sing for my family, especially during family gatherings or small concerts. It makes me happy to entertain them.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I sing for my friends, they feel excited and joyful.

× Yeah, of course I love seeing because it's a help me to reduce stress and release stress.

✓ Yeah, of course I love singing because it helps me to reduce stress and release stress.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' not 'seeing'. Also, 'it's a help me' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me' to correctly express the function of singing in reducing stress.

× Like I always sing with my friend during karaoke.

✓ Like I always sing with my friends during karaoke.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the context implies singing with more than one person.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In American English, the past participle of 'learn' is 'learned'. 'Learnt' is British English but 'learned' is more common and preferred in many contexts.

× No, because I think it's it's not necessary for learning.

✓ No, because I think it's not necessary to learn.

The phrase 'for learning' is awkward here; 'to learn' is the correct infinitive form to express purpose.

× So another I I often goes sing with my friends.

✓ So sometimes I often go singing with my friends.

The verb 'goes' does not agree with the subject 'I'; it should be 'go'. Also, 'sing' should be in the gerund form 'singing' after 'go'. 'Another' is incorrect here; 'sometimes' fits better.

× So another I I often goes sing with my friends.

✓ So sometimes I often go singing with my friends.

After the verb 'go', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'sing' becomes 'singing'.

× I think it's fun and can reduce my stress.

✓ I think it's fun and can reduce my stress.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× Well, I used to sing for my family like when I, when I, when my, my family have a concert like, but they are something I usually sing for family and I think it's very good.

✓ Well, I used to sing for my family, like when my family has a concert. Usually, I sing for my family and I think it's very good.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular collective noun 'family'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× Well, that good questions because of course, yeah, I am if if I sing people like my friend very excited and I think being singing can bring.

✓ Well, that's a good question because of course, yeah, if I sing, people like my friends get very excited and I think singing can bring happiness.

'That good questions' should be 'that's a good question' for singular agreement. 'People like my friend' should be 'people like my friends' for plural. 'Being singing' is incorrect; 'singing' is the correct gerund form here.