Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“seeing”应为“singing”，“relieve my strength”应为“relieve my stress”。建议注意单词拼写和搭配，避免语法错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy and helps me relieve stress. I often sing with my friends during karaoke nights, which is a great way to strengthen our relationships.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但“relieve my stress”应改为“relieves my stress”以符合语法。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，使表达更准确。

예시: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I enjoy listening to music because it makes me feel happy and relieves my stress.

제안: 回答中存在多处错误，如“see”应为“sing”，“find our relationships”表达不准确，且“help me social”不符合英语表达习惯。建议加强基础词汇和句型练习，确保表达准确自然。

예시: I prefer to sing for my friends because it helps strengthen our relationships and improves my social skills.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但“bad emotions”可用更自然的表达如“negative feelings”，“more happy”应为“happier”。建议注意词汇搭配和比较级的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When people feel sad, music can help relieve negative feelings, and soft or classical music can make them feel happier.

× Yes, I like singing because seeing can make me happy and relieve my strength.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing can make me happy and relieve my strength.

这里'seeing'用错了，应该用'singing'，因为前文提到喜欢唱歌，'seeing'（看见）与上下文不符。动词后接动名词时要用正确的动名词形式。

× We usually have karaoke nights and it's a good way to bond our relationships.

✓ We usually have karaoke nights and it's a good way to bond our relationships.

此句中'bond our relationships'表达不自然，正确表达应为'bond with each other'或'strengthen our relationships'，但根据题目要求只纠正语法错误，非语法错误不改。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'learnt'是英式英语过去分词，'learned'是美式英语，两者均可，但根据语境和习惯，建议使用'learned'。

× No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I like listening to music because it makes me feel happy and relieve my stress.

✓ No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but I like listening to music because it makes me feel happy and relieves my stress.

主语是'it'，动词'relieve'应使用第三人称单数形式'relieves'，以保持主谓一致。

× I prefer to see for my friends, it's a good way to find our relationships and help me social.

✓ I prefer to sing for my friends, it's a good way to build our relationships and help me socialize.

'see for my friends'错误，应为'sing for my friends'；'find our relationships'表达不当，应为'build our relationships'；'help me social'应为'help me socialize'。根据题目只纠正语法错误，故将'see'改为'sing'，'help me social'改为'help me socialize'。

× some soft music or classic music may make people feel more happy.

✓ some soft music or classical music may make people feel happier.

'classic music'应为'classical music'，'more happy'应为'happier'，因为比较级用法错误。