Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了不喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

예시: I don't like singing because I feel embarrassed and shy when I sing in front of others. Also, I'm not confident about my singing ability.

제안: 回答中存在双重否定和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not good at it. Also, I rarely sing in front of others.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够连贯，有语法错误和重复。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意代词使用的准确性。

예시: I would like to sing for my close friends and family because I feel comfortable and confident around them. They won't laugh at me, and I can share my emotions through singing.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议注意时态一致，使用更准确的词汇，并使句子更自然流畅。

예시: Absolutely. Singing a song you love allows you to feel the emotions in the music and forget about your problems. Immersing yourself in the song can make you feel happy.

× I dislike seeing when I always feel embarrassed and shy when I sing in front of others.

✓ I dislike singing because I always feel embarrassed and shy when I sing in front of others.

这里动词后面应该接动名词形式，'dislike'后面接'singing'而不是'seeing'，且原句中'when'使用不当，应改为'because'表示原因。

× I'm I'm not very confident about my singing ability so I didn't like sing song.

✓ I'm not very confident about my singing ability, so I don't like singing songs.

'like'后面应接动名词形式'singing'，且时态应与当前情况一致，使用一般现在时'don't like'。

× No, I haven't learned how to sing because of my poor sing ability.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because of my poor singing ability.

'sing'作为名词时应使用其动名词形式'singing'，表示'唱歌能力'。

× And I never seldom sing in front of others, so I didn't learn how to sing.

✓ And I seldom sing in front of others, so I haven't learned how to sing.

'never seldom'是双重否定，应去掉'never'只用'seldom'，且时态应保持一致，使用现在完成时'haven't learned'。

× I will sing for my close people because when I sing in front of them I won't feel shy and embarrassed, they won't laugh at me and in front of them I feel more con confident and I love him.

✓ I will sing for my close people because when I sing in front of them I won't feel shy and embarrassed, they won't laugh at me, and in front of them I feel more confident and I love them.

'con confident'是拼写错误，应为'confident'；'I love him'与前文不符，应为'I love them'指代'close people'。

× I love him. I love them so I can share my emotion with.

✓ I love them so I can share my emotions with them.

代词使用不一致，前后应统一指代同一群体；'emotion'应为复数形式'emotions'，且句尾应补充宾语'them'。

× When you sing a song you love, you can feel the emotion in the songs and you forgot the bad things in your life.

✓ When you sing a song you love, you can feel the emotion in the songs and you forget the bad things in your life.

句中时态应保持一致，'forgot'是过去式，应改为一般现在时'forget'。

× You just immersed in the songs so that sounds can make you happy.

✓ You just immerse yourself in the songs so that the sounds can make you happy.

'immersed'应为动词原形'immerse'，且需要反身代词'yourself'；'that sounds'应为'the sounds'表示特指。