Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在词汇使用错误（如"seeing"应为"singing"），句子结构不够清晰，表达不够自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇来描述感受。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For instance, when I feel sad, I like to sing slow, soothing songs, and when I'm happy, I prefer upbeat and energetic tunes.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且有词汇错误（如"see"应为"sing"）。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用正确的词汇描述学习经历。

예시: Yes, I have learned how to sing because I am an art student preparing for the college entrance exam in China. I took singing lessons from a teacher in a training class to improve my skills.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误（"other group"应为"band"或"group"），句子不够连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇，注意句子连贯性，并避免重复表达。

예시: I want to sing for my favorite band because their music encourages me when I'm feeling down. Singing for them would be my way to show appreciation for their support.

제안: 回答中多次出现"seeing"错误，应为"singing"，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意词汇准确性，使用更自然的表达方式，并举具体例子说明。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it inspires people, especially during difficult times. For example, many people enjoy singing karaoke with friends to relieve stress and feel joyful.

× Absolutely, I really like seeing things when I sing a song, I can feel a sense of pleasant.

✓ Absolutely, I really like singing songs; I can feel a sense of pleasure.

这里'seeing things'用法错误，应该用动名词形式'singing'表示喜欢唱歌；'a sense of pleasant'应改为'a sense of pleasure'，因为'pleasant'是形容词，名词形式是'pleasure'。

× For example, when I feel upset, I always listen to some blue songs and sing with the melody.

✓ For example, when I feel upset, I always listen to some sad songs and sing along with the melody.

'blue songs'表达不准确，应该用'sad songs'表示忧伤的歌曲；'sing with the melody'应改为'sing along with the melody'，表示跟着旋律唱。

× Also when I am excited or delighted, I always sing some songs that have strong bats.

✓ Also, when I am excited or delighted, I always sing some songs that have strong beats.

'strong bats'是拼写错误，正确应为'strong beats'，表示强烈的节拍。

× Of course, for the return that I'm an art student when I prepare for college insurance examination in China, so I have to learn how to see a somewhere to cope with the test.

✓ Of course, because I am an art student preparing for the college entrance examination in China, I have to learn how to sing somewhere to cope with the test.

'for the return that'用法错误，应改为'because'表示原因；'college insurance examination'应为'college entrance examination'；'learn how to see a somewhere'应为'learn how to sing somewhere'。

× So I learned how to sing from my teacher in the art examination training class.

✓ So I learned how to sing from my teacher in the art examination training class.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I want to sing a song for my favorite other group because when I feel upset, I always choose to listen to their songs which can encourage me.

✓ I want to sing a song for my favorite other group because when I feel upset, I always choose to listen to their songs which encourage me.

'which can encourage me'中'can'多余，改为'which encourage me'更自然。

× So I think they help me a lot in some through time.

✓ So I think they help me a lot through some tough times.

'in some through time'表达不正确，应为'through some tough times'表示经历困难时期。

× In return, I also want to see a song for them to express my appreciation.

✓ In return, I also want to sing a song for them to express my appreciation.

'see a song'用法错误，应为'sing a song'表示唱歌。

× Of course, as you can see, seeing is an approach that can inspire someone, especially when they have some trouble in their life.

✓ Of course, as you can see, singing is an approach that can inspire someone, especially when they have some trouble in their life.

'seeing'用错，应为'singing'表示唱歌。

× They probably seeing plenty of songs in karaoke bar with their friends, which helps them to release their stress.

✓ They probably sing plenty of songs in karaoke bars with their friends, which helps them to release their stress.

'They probably seeing'语法错误，应为'They probably sing'；'karaoke bar'应为复数形式'karaoke bars'。