Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
Yes, I really enjoy singing because whenever I play music and sing along, it cheers up my mood, it freshens up my mind so my day will go better.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No, in fact, I've never learned singing because it never crossed my mind or it I never thought about taking singing professionally. So however I sing, I'm fine with that.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
To be honest, there is no such individuals for whom I would want to sing. That's just not my kind of thing. Guess I'm just not that romantic or lively person.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes, I presume that singing can often brighten up the mood of individuals because we human beings naturally like the rhythm and sound in a contagious flow, so people enjoy listening to songs and musics.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more concise by combining ideas and using linking words to improve coherence.
예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it cheers me up and refreshes my mind, which helps me have a better day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains some awkward phrasing and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid repeating similar ideas.
예시: No, I have never learned to sing because I never considered it professionally, and I'm comfortable singing the way I do.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 65.0제안: Your answer is honest but could be improved by providing a clearer topic sentence and more specific supporting details. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'Guess' in formal speaking tests.
예시: Honestly, I don't have anyone in particular I want to sing for because singing is not something I take seriously or associate with romance.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is relevant and includes supporting details, but some phrases are awkward or unclear. Use simpler, clearer expressions and correct word forms to improve naturalness.
예시: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because humans naturally enjoy rhythm and melodies, which can lift their mood.
문법
× No, in fact, I've never learned singing because it never crossed my mind or it I never thought about taking singing professionally.
✓ No, in fact, I've never learned to sing because it never crossed my mind or I never thought about taking singing professionally.
The verb 'learn' is typically followed by the infinitive form 'to sing' rather than the gerund 'singing'. Using 'to sing' is grammatically correct and sounds natural in this context.
× Yes, I presume that singing can often brighten up the mood of individuals because we human beings naturally like the rhythm and sound in a contagious flow, so people enjoy listening to songs and musics.
✓ Yes, I presume that singing can often brighten up the mood of individuals because we human beings naturally like the rhythm and sound in a contagious flow, so people enjoy listening to songs and music.
The word 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'musics' is incorrect. The correct form is 'music' when referring to the general concept or multiple pieces collectively.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)