Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复表达“I'm not an excellent singer”和“I'm not good at singing”，显得冗余且不自然。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，同时可以增加一些具体的原因或感受，使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and boosts my confidence when I perform in front of others.

제안: 回答语句不完整且语法混乱，缺乏清晰的结构和连贯性。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并用连接词组织信息，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in middle school because it was one of our subjects, and I wanted to perform well and get good grades.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且句子较长缺乏停顿。建议分句表达，注意语法准确，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I am an introverted person, so I feel nervous singing in front of strangers. Therefore, I prefer to sing for my parents or close friends because they support me and boost my confidence.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，句子结构清晰，并用连接词使观点更连贯。

예시: I think singing can bring happiness depending on the song. For example, happy and romantic songs can uplift your mood, but sad songs might remind you of bad memories and make you feel down.

× Well, I have learned how to say where I was a middle school student at that time, singing was one of the subjects of our school and I wanted to get get the higher point and perform well in class so.

✓ Well, I learned how to sing when I was a middle school student. At that time, singing was one of the subjects at our school, and I wanted to get a higher score and perform well in class.

句子中使用了“have learned”但描述的是过去某个具体时间发生的事情，应该用一般过去时“learned”。另外，原句中“how to say”应为“how to sing”，且句子结构混乱，需拆分成多个句子以表达清晰。

× Well I'm an introverted person so I'm afraid of seeing in front of the public of the strangers I prefer seeing for my parents or my best is they will support me and give me confidence.

✓ Well, I'm an introverted person, so I'm afraid of singing in front of the public or strangers. I prefer singing for my parents or my best friends because they will support me and give me confidence.

原句中“afraid of seeing in front of the public of the strangers”中“seeing”应为“singing”，“in front of the public of the strangers”表达不当，应改为“in front of the public or strangers”。此外，“prefer seeing for”应为“prefer singing for”。

× I prefer seeing for my parents or my best is they will support me and give me confidence.

✓ I prefer singing for my parents or my best friends because they will support me and give me confidence.

“my best”应为复数形式“my best friends”，表示“我最好的朋友们”。

× But if you sing a song which are sad that will mention the bad memories about you and will make you sad.

✓ But if you sing a song which is sad, it will remind you of bad memories and make you sad.

“which are sad”中的“are”应改为“is”，因为“song”是单数。且“mention the bad memories about you”表达不准确，应改为“remind you of bad memories”。