Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“can brings”应为“can bring”，以及“when I sing it”中的“it”多余。建议注意动词形式和避免多余词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I like singing very much because it brings me happiness and helps me feel relaxed.

제안: 回答中“something lessons”表达不准确，应使用具体的课程名称或通用词汇如“singing lessons”。此外，句子结构可以更自然，避免生硬。

예시: No, I've never learned how to sing before, but I am planning to take singing lessons in the future.

제안: 回答中有重复词“is is”，且“love her very deep”表达不正确，应为“love her deeply”。建议注意语法和用词准确性，同时可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。

예시: I want to sing for my mother because she is the most beautiful woman in the world, and I love her deeply.

제안: 回答中“seeing”应为“singing”，且“find strengths in the music”表达不够自然，建议使用更贴切的表达，如“find comfort”或“feel inspired”。此外，“improve people's emotion”应改为“improve people's mood”。

예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music can provide comfort and good songs can improve people's mood.

× Yes, I like singing very much because singing can brings me happiness and I feel very relaxed when I sing it.

✓ Yes, I like singing very much because singing can bring me happiness and I feel very relaxed when I sing it.

动词bring在这里应与情态动词can连用，情态动词后动词用原形，不能用第三人称单数形式brings。

× No, I've never learned how to sing before, but I am planning to take something lessons in the future.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing before, but I am planning to take some lessons in the future.

something用于肯定句中表示不确定的事物，修饰可数名词lessons时应使用some。

× I want to sing for my mother because my mother is is the most beautiful woman in the world and I love her very deep.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because my mother is the most beautiful woman in the world and I love her very deeply.

句中重复了is，属于句子结构错误；love后应使用副词deeply修饰动词，而不是形容词deep。

× Yes, I think seeing can bring happiness to people because people can find strengths in the music and some good music can improve people's emotion.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because people can find strength in the music and some good music can improve people's emotions.

seeing应为singing，属于代词使用错误；strength通常不可数，复数形式strengths不合适；emotion应为复数emotions，表示多种情绪。