Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Жауабыңыз табиғи және түсінікті, бірақ кейбір қайталанулар мен грамматикалық қателер бар. Мысалы, "not to not to" деген тіркесті түзету керек. Сондай-ақ, жауапты қысқарту және нақтылау қажет. Мысалы, артық сөздерді алып тастап, сөйлемдерді логикалық байланыстыру үшін "because" сияқты байланыс сөздерін пайдаланыңыз.

예시: I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it. For example, I often feel embarrassed when I try to sing, so I avoid singing in public.

제안: Жауабыңызда қайталанулар және мағынасы түсініксіз сөз тіркестері бар, мысалы, "I have some potential to think well". Бұл сөйлемді нақты және түсінікті етіп өзгерту керек. Сонымен қатар, сөйлемдерді байланыстыру үшін "but" немесе "because" сияқты сөздерді қолданыңыз.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing, but I would like to try because I believe I have some potential and want to improve my skills.

제안: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер мен қайталанулар бар, мысалы, "I I've", "it would it". Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдер түсініксіз және логикалық байланыс жетіспейді. Жауабыңызды нақты және қысқа етіп, байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз.

예시: Since I was a kid, I've always dreamed of singing at my wedding for my future spouse because they are the most important person in my life.

제안: Жауабыңызда қайталанулар бар, мысалы, "because singing because singing" және "can can be". Сондай-ақ, "after seeing their favorite song" деген тіркес дұрыс емес, оны "after listening to their favorite song" деп өзгерту керек. Сөйлемдерді қысқарту және байланыстыру сөздерін қолдану ұсынылады.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many feel uplifted after listening to their favorite songs.

× For example, when I try songs I often feel embarrassed and prefer not to not to let others hear me, so I usually avoid singing in public.

✓ For example, when I try singing songs I often feel embarrassed and prefer not to let others hear me, so I usually avoid singing in public.

The verb 'try' should be followed by the gerund form 'singing' to indicate the activity attempted. Also, the phrase 'prefer not to not to' contains a repeated 'not to' which is incorrect; it should be 'prefer not to'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× No, I have never learned how to sing. However, I would like to try it because I think I I have some potential to think well and I really want to improve my skill.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing. However, I would like to try it because I think I have some potential to sing well and I really want to improve my skill.

The phrase 'potential to think well' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'potential to sing well' to match the topic. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error. Correcting these improves the sentence's meaning and grammatical correctness.

× Since I was a kid I I've always dreamed about singing in my wedding for my future spouse and it would it. It will be the only person I've ever seen in my whole life so I will try it.

✓ Since I was a kid, I've always dreamed about singing at my wedding for my future spouse. They will be the only person I've ever seen in my whole life, so I will try it.

The phrase 'it would it' is unclear and likely a mistake; replacing it with a clearer sentence improves understanding. Also, 'in my wedding' should be 'at my wedding' to use the correct preposition. Changing 'it' to 'they' correctly refers to 'my future spouse'. These corrections fix preposition use and pronoun reference.

× Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because singing because singing allows individuals express their emotions and it can can be a great way to relieve stress.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because singing allows individuals to express their emotions and it can be a great way to relieve stress.

The phrase 'because singing because singing' repeats unnecessarily and should be simplified. Also, 'allows individuals express' is missing the preposition 'to' before the verb 'express'. The repeated 'can can' is a duplication error. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For example, many people feel uplifted and more positive after seeing their favorite song.

✓ For example, many people feel uplifted and more positive after hearing their favorite song.

The verb 'seeing' is incorrect when referring to experiencing a song; the correct verb is 'hearing'. This correction ensures the preposition and verb usage match the context of listening to music.