Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“regret seeing”和“pineapple emotions”使表达不清晰。建议使用简单且准确的表达，避免无意义的词汇，保持句子简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I definitely like singing because it is a great way to express my feelings and emotions. Sometimes, I sing spontaneously when I hear catchy lyrics or melodies.

제안: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺乏逻辑连贯性。建议直接回答问题，使用简单句表达是否学过唱歌，并说明原因，避免重复和无关内容。

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I am not a professional and I prefer to sing by myself as a way to express my feelings.

제안: 回答中性别混淆（he/she），句子不完整且缺乏连贯性。建议明确表达对象，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I want to sing for my favorite idol because he is a professional singer. I would like to show my gratitude and admiration by singing a song for him.

제안: 回答不完整，句子未结束，表达重复。建议完整表达观点，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express and release their emotions. Moreover, singing for others can help share joy and create a positive atmosphere.

× I regret seeing as a very useful way to express my feelings and emotions and it can let out all my pineapple emotions.

✓ I regard singing as a very useful way to express my feelings and emotions and it can let out all my pent-up emotions.

这里'regret seeing'是错误的搭配，应该用'regard singing'表示“我认为唱歌是……”。'pineapple emotions'是错误表达，正确应为'pent-up emotions'，表示“积压的情绪”。

× And sometimes I just sing spontaneously when I heard some lyrics and some very catchy sound.

✓ And sometimes I just sing spontaneously when I hear some lyrics and some very catchy sounds.

这里时态不一致，'heard'应改为一般现在时'hear'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。'sound'应为复数'sounds'。

× Well, I didn't join any for more sections because I'm not a person who lead to you be skillful in saying and I'm not a professional student in this major and I just regret it seeing as a way to express myself and sing by myself.

✓ Well, I didn't join any formal sessions because I'm not a person who can lead you to be skillful in singing and I'm not a professional student in this major and I just regard it as a way to express myself and sing by myself.

'for more sections'应为'formal sessions'，更符合语境。'lead to you be skillful in saying'语法错误，正确表达为'can lead you to be skillful in singing'。'regret it seeing as'应为'regard it as'。

× Well, actually I want to sing for my favorite idol and he's a person who majors in the singing and she's a singer too.

✓ Well, actually I want to sing for my favorite idol and he's a person who majors in singing and he's a singer too.

代词不一致，前面说的是'my favorite idol'（男性），后面却用'she's'，应保持一致用'he's'。

× And I just wanted to express my gratitude and my love for him and I want to sing a song for him that to show my.

✓ And I just want to express my gratitude and my love for him and I want to sing a song for him to show it.

句子结构不完整，'that to show my'缺少宾语，改为'to show it'使句子完整通顺。

× Well, absolutely. Like I said before, it can express emotions and let out a pent up emotions.

✓ Well, absolutely. Like I said before, it can express emotions and let out pent-up emotions.

'a pent up emotions'中'a'与复数'emotions'不匹配，应去掉'a'。

× And secondly when you sing to someone and you can share happiness with others and you just.

✓ And secondly, when you sing to someone, you can share happiness with others.

句子不完整，末尾的'and you just'无意义，应删除使句子完整。