Part 1
시험관
Do you like singing? Why?
수험생
I don't like singing.
시험관
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
수험생
No, I haven't.
시험관
Who do you want to sing for?
수험생
I want singing my sister.
시험관
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
수험생
Yes.
Do you like singing? Why?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答过于简短且缺乏细节,建议在表达不喜欢唱歌的同时,说明原因,使回答更自然且内容丰富。
예시: No, I don't like singing because I feel shy and I am not confident about my voice.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
점수: 50.0제안: 回答简洁但缺乏扩展,建议补充说明没有学唱歌的原因或相关经历,使回答更完整。
예시: No, I haven't learnt how to sing because I never had the chance to take singing lessons.
Who do you want to sing for?
점수: 30.0제안: 语法错误且表达不清晰,建议使用正确的句型并补充说明想为谁唱歌及原因。
예시: I want to sing for my sister because she always supports me and I want to make her happy.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答过于简短,建议补充说明为什么唱歌能带来快乐,增加内容的丰富性。
예시: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and feel relaxed.
× I want singing my sister.
✓ I want to sing for my sister.
句中动词want后应接不定式to sing,而不是动名词singing。此外,表达“为某人唱歌”应使用介词for,完整表达为"sing for my sister"。建议改为"I want to sing for my sister."