Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn để thể hiện cảm xúc của mình.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed after a long day.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và câu bị ngắt quãng. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I have never learned how to sing because I have always been more interested in hobbies like playing sports. However, I might try to learn singing in the future if I have enough time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp từ và thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng. Bạn nên nói rõ lý do và tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I would like to sing for my mom because she sings very well, and I want to try to impress her with my singing.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý kiến của mình.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because after a tiring day at work, singing helps them relax and feel joyful.

× Oh, I'm a people.

✓ Oh, I'm a person.

The word 'people' is plural and cannot be used with 'I'm' which is singular. The correct singular noun is 'person'. This error is about using the correct pronoun and noun form to match singular subject.

× Very nice singing.

✓ I like singing very much.

The phrase 'Very nice singing' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It lacks a subject and verb. The correction provides a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× Yeah, it bring me happy and it's make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yeah, it brings me happiness and it makes me feel relaxed.

The verbs 'bring' and 'make' need to agree with the singular subject 'it'. They should be in third person singular form 'brings' and 'makes'. Also, 'happy' should be a noun 'happiness' to fit the sentence.

× No, I have never learned it before because I because I have always been more interested in all the hobbies like playing sport.

✓ No, I have never learned it before because I have always been more interested in hobbies like playing sports.

The phrase 'playing sport' should be 'playing sports' as 'sports' is plural. Also, the repeated 'because I' is redundant and removed for clarity.

× Also I don't have much time to practice singing seriously.

✓ Also, I don't have enough time to practice singing seriously.

'Much time' is used with uncountable nouns but 'enough time' is more appropriate to express sufficiency in this context.

× Maybe in the future I will try to learn if.

✓ Maybe in the future I will try to learn it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'if' which is incorrect. The correct sentence should end with 'it' referring to singing.

× Oh, I think I want to sing for my mom because my mom, my mom sing is very my mom sing very well and I want to try to sing for my mom.

✓ Oh, I think I want to sing for my mom because she sings very well and I want to try to sing for her.

The sentence has repeated phrases and incorrect pronoun usage. 'My mom sing is very' is incorrect. The correct form uses 'she sings' and 'for her' to refer properly to the mother.

× Oh, I think it can bring happiness to people because after working time people feel very tired and when you try to try to sing, you can feel happy and.

✓ Oh, I think it can bring happiness to people because after working, people feel very tired and when you try to sing, you can feel happy.

The phrase 'after working time' is awkward; 'after working' is better. The repeated 'try to' is redundant and removed. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected to a complete form.