Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite natural and shows your feelings, but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Also, add linking words to make your answer smoother and more coherent.

예시: Yes, I love singing because when I listen to my favourite songs, I often find myself singing along without thinking. Moreover, I feel confident about my singing ability, which makes it enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar mistakes and is a bit unclear. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to explain your ideas clearly and avoid informal phrases like 'wanna'.

예시: Technically, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I have searched online for tips on how to improve my singing because I want to impress my friends.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and use correct adverbs such as 'seldom' instead of 'seldomly'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

예시: I don't have a specific person in mind to sing for; however, if I had to choose, it would be my parents because they rarely get to hear me sing.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to explain your reasons.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. However, it is important to sing well because poor singing might have the opposite effect and not make people happy.

× I love singing so much because when I listen to the music that I like, I will unconsciously, uh, pop out some lyrics of the song and I'm quite confident that I'm singing well.

✓ I love singing so much because when I listen to the music that I like, I unconsciously, uh, pop out some lyrics of the song and I'm quite confident that I'm singing well.

The use of 'will' here is unnecessary because the action is habitual or happens naturally when listening to music. In English, we usually use the simple present tense to describe habitual actions or general truths, so 'I will unconsciously pop out' should be 'I unconsciously pop out'. This makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× Technically I didn't, but I'm I had searched about how to sing.

✓ Technically I didn't, but I had searched about how to sing.

The phrase 'I'm I had searched' is incorrect and likely a typo or confusion. The correct past perfect tense 'I had searched' is appropriate here to indicate an action completed before now. Also, 'searched about' is not idiomatic; it should be 'searched for' or 'looked up'. However, since only grammar mistakes listed in the problem types are corrected, the main correction is removing 'I'm' to fix the tense issue.

× Because I wanna show off to my friends actually.

✓ Because I want to show off to my friends actually.

The use of 'wanna' is informal and considered slang. While not strictly a grammar error, it is better to use the correct form 'want to' in formal or semi-formal speech. This correction improves clarity and appropriateness of the sentence.

× Umm actually I don't have a specific person that I want to sing for, but if you ask me I would say my parents because they seldomly listen to my sing singing.

✓ Umm actually I don't have a specific person that I want to sing for, but if you ask me I would say my parents because they seldom listen to my singing.

The word 'seldomly' is not commonly used; the correct adverb is 'seldom'. Also, 'sing singing' is redundant and incorrect; it should be just 'singing'. These corrections fix the improper adverb and redundant noun usage, improving grammatical correctness.

× Yes, but a friendly reminder is you have to sing Well.

✓ Yes, but a friendly reminder is you have to sing well.

The word 'Well' should not be capitalized in the middle of the sentence. Also, the modal verb 'have to' is correctly used here to express necessity, so no change needed for modal verb. The correction is capitalization only.

× If you singing, it's worse than I can have nothing to say.

✓ If you are singing, it's worse than I can say nothing.

The phrase 'If you singing' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' for present continuous tense. Also, 'I can have nothing to say' is awkward; 'I can say nothing' is more natural. The correction fixes the verb form and improves sentence clarity.

× There's no alternatives to make people happiness.

✓ There are no alternatives to make people happy.

'There's' is singular but 'alternatives' is plural, so 'There are' is correct (related to problem type 3 and 27). Also, 'make people happiness' is incorrect; the adjective 'happy' should be used instead of the noun 'happiness' after 'make'. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and word form errors.