Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about when and why you like singing.

예시: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. Whenever I have free time, I listen to music on Spotify or YouTube and sing along. I especially like singing loudly in the bathroom while taking a shower. Singing makes me feel happy and refreshed.

제안: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be specific about your favorite singers and your practice habits.

예시: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, I enjoy listening to Bollywood singers like A.R. Rahman and Shreya Ghoshal. I often mimic their songs while taking a shower, which helps me practice singing informally.

제안: Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid confusion by clearly stating who sings for whom.

예시: I like to sing for my friends and younger brother. We often sing together when we go on picnics or study. Singing helps us relieve stress and enjoy our time together.

제안: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically. Be specific about how singing affects emotions and avoid contradictory statements.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it calms our mood. Soothing songs are important in our lives, especially when we feel stressed or depressed. Listening to or singing songs can help us feel better and more relaxed.

× whenever I got a free time

✓ whenever I get free time

The phrase 'a free time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article here. The correct form is 'free time' without 'a'. Also, 'got' should be 'get' to match the present tense context.

× listen music

✓ listen to music

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Therefore, 'listen music' should be corrected to 'listen to music'.

× I just mimic to them in bathroom whenever I take my shower

✓ I just mimic them in the bathroom whenever I take my shower

The verb 'mimic' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, 'in bathroom' should be 'in the bathroom' because 'bathroom' is a singular countable noun and needs the definite article 'the'.

× my friends and my younger brother was usually sing for me

✓ my friends and my younger brother usually sing for me

The subject 'my friends and my younger brother' is plural, so the verb should be 'sing' not 'was sing'. Also, 'was usually sing' is incorrect; 'usually' should come before the verb 'sing'.

× whenever we are feel depressed or in a stress

✓ whenever we feel depressed or stressed

The phrase 'are feel' is incorrect; 'feel' is a stative verb and does not use the auxiliary 'are'. Also, 'in a stress' is incorrect; 'stressed' is the correct adjective form.

× I just mimic to them in bathroom whenever I take my shower

✓ I just mimic them in the bathroom whenever I take my shower

The verb 'mimic' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, 'in bathroom' should be 'in the bathroom' because 'bathroom' is a singular countable noun and needs the definite article 'the'.