Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达“喜欢”，并且可以更自然地连接句子，使表达更流畅。可以增加具体细节说明为什么唱歌让你开心。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it allows me to express my emotions and imitate my favorite singers, which always makes me feel joyful.

제안: 回答中语法和表达稍显生硬，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。可以具体说明使用唱歌软件的体验。

예시: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I usually practice by myself using a singing app that scores my performance, which helps me improve gradually.

제안: 回答中表达不够自然，语法有误，建议用更地道的表达方式说明害羞的原因，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Honestly, I prefer singing alone because I get nervous and run out of breath when singing in front of others, so I usually avoid public performances.

제안: 回答中有语法错误（things应为thing），建议用更准确的词汇表达，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。可以举例说明唱歌如何带来快乐。

예시: In my opinion, singing is a wonderful way to relieve stress and bring joy to people because it helps them relax and express their feelings.

× No, I always learn to sing by myself.

✓ No, I always learn to sing by myself.

该句中“always learn”使用的是一般现在时，符合表达习惯，无需修改。

× Sometimes I will sing a song in a singing app.

✓ Sometimes I sing a song in a singing app.

“Sometimes”表示习惯性动作，通常用一般现在时，使用“will”表示将来时不合适，应改为一般现在时。

× Then they will give you a score that you sing a song.

✓ Then they will give you a score based on your singing.

原句结构不清晰，“that you sing a song”不符合英语表达习惯，应改为“based on your singing”更准确表达评分依据。

× I'm very shy for singing.

✓ I'm very shy about singing.

“shy”后面应接介词“about”表示对某事害羞，使用“for”是不正确的介词搭配。

× because singing is a relaxing things.

✓ because singing is a relaxing thing.

“thing”应与单数主语“singing”保持一致，使用单数形式“thing”，而非复数“things”。