Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语法上有错误，且句子结构较简单。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并丰富句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I like singing because it helps me relax and allows me to express my true self.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，建议注意句子连贯性，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I often sing by myself and sometimes with my friends.

제안: 回答内容具体且有逻辑，但句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议使用连接词分割句子，使表达更清晰。

예시: I want to sing for my friend Lily because she sang a beautiful song for me last time, so I would like to return the favor by singing a song as a gift for her.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且句子结构重复。建议使用正确的时态和多样的句型，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it makes us feel joyful, helps us relax, and allows us to forget our worries.

× I like singing because singing make me feel relax and I can be myself.

✓ I like singing because singing makes me feel relaxed and I can be myself.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'. Also, 'relax' should be 'relaxed' as it is an adjective describing the feeling.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing I I just sing by myself and sometimes sing with my friends.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing. I just sing by myself and sometimes sing with my friends.

A period is needed to separate two independent clauses. Also, 'I I' is a typo and should be corrected to a single 'I'.

× I want to sing for my friends Lily because last time she sang a beautiful song for me and I want to sing a song as a gift for her.

✓ I want to sing for my friend Lily because last time she sang a beautiful song for me and I want to sing a song as a gift for her.

'Friends' is plural, but the sentence refers to one person, Lily, so it should be 'friend' (singular).

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when we singing we feel very happy and we can relax ourselves and we can forget the worries.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when we sing we feel very happy and we can relax ourselves and we can forget our worries.

'When we singing' is incorrect; it should be 'when we sing' because after 'when' we use the base form of the verb. Also, 'the worries' should be 'our worries' to specify whose worries.