Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day at work. However, I don't think I have a very good singing voice.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意冠词和介词的正确使用。

예시: Actually, I haven't had formal singing lessons, but I have learned a lot by watching tutorials on YouTube and Bilibili, which have helped me improve my singing skills.

제안: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但句子结构稍显混乱。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because they are very supportive. Their appreciation makes me feel special and motivates me to perform better.

제안: 回答内容完整且有例子，但有个别词汇错误（seeing应为 singing）。建议注意发音和拼写，确保表达准确。

예시: Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions. For example, when someone feels upset or stressed, singing can help release negative feelings.

× ABS absolutely yes I really into singing because I think it is a very good way to help me to lay off steam after working and starting all day.

✓ ABS absolutely yes I am really into singing because I think it is a very good way to help me to lay off steam after working and studying all day.

句中缺少动词be动词，'I really into singing'应为'I am really into singing'，这是动词+ing形式的用法错误。建议在动词+ing前加上适当的be动词。

× However, I am I think I am not a very good voice to sing.

✓ However, I think I do not have a very good voice to sing.

句中'not a very good voice to sing'表达不准确，'voice'是名词，不能直接用作形容词。应使用动词短语表达能力，如'do not have a very good voice'。

× Actually I haven't learned how to sing scientifically but I used to learn how to sing on Internet through the the YouTube and maybe the Billy Billy website so it helps me a lot to improve my singing skills.

✓ Actually I haven't learned how to sing scientifically but I used to learn how to sing on the Internet through YouTube and maybe the Bilibili website, so it helped me a lot to improve my singing skills.

句中'helps'应与过去时态保持一致，因前文使用了过去时态'used to learn'，所以后文应使用过去时态'helped'。另外，'the Internet'前应加定冠词。

× Actually I haven't learned how to sing scientifically but I used to learn how to sing on Internet through the the YouTube and maybe the Billy Billy website so it helps me a lot to improve my singing skills.

✓ Actually I haven't learned how to sing scientifically but I used to learn how to sing on the Internet through YouTube and maybe the Bilibili website, so it helped me a lot to improve my singing skills.

'on Internet'应为'on the Internet'，互联网作为特定名词前需加定冠词'the'。

× I would like to sing for my family and close friends, sing for them, feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform much better.

✓ I would like to sing for my family and close friends, to make them feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivates me to perform much better.

句中'sing for them, feel special'缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整表达，如'to make them feel special'。

× Yes, I think seeing can definitely bring happiness to people because it is a wonderful way to express their emotions.

✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it is a wonderful way to express their emotions.

句中'seeing'应为'singing'，拼写错误导致词义错误。

× For example, when someone feels upset or stressed, singing can help them remove negative emotions.

✓ For example, when someone feels upset or stressed, singing can help him or her remove negative emotions.

'someone'为单数，后续代词应使用单数形式'him or her'，而非复数'them'。