Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and clarify your ideas with linking words. For example, instead of "I sing song" say "I like to sing songs" and instead of "listen on my TV" say "listen to music on my TV." Also, explain why singing reflects your mind with a specific reason.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions. Whenever I have free time, I like to sing songs or listen to music on my TV while doing household chores.

제안: Make your answer more coherent and structured by using linking words and clearer sentences. Avoid repeating the same idea and try to explain your experience with singing more specifically.

예시: No, I have never taken singing lessons. However, sometimes I try to sing along with the lyrics for fun, but I don't have a strong interest in singing seriously.

제안: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about who you sing for and why.

예시: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I sing old songs with my mom, but most of the time I enjoy singing along with the lyrics by myself during my free time.

제안: Make your answer more natural and organized by using proper grammar and linking words. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion clearly.

예시: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I have free time, I like to sing or listen to songs on TV, which helps me relax and focus better on my work afterwards.

× When I got leisure time, I sing song and most of the time I listen on my TV when I do household charos.

✓ When I have leisure time, I sing songs and most of the time I listen to my TV while I do household chores.

The original sentence uses 'got' which is past tense instead of present tense 'have' to indicate habitual action. 'Sing song' should be plural 'sing songs' to match the activity. The preposition 'listen on my TV' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to my TV'. 'Household charos' is a misspelling of 'household chores'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× most of the time I listen on my TV

✓ most of the time I listen to my TV

The verb 'listen' is followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the source of sound. Using 'on' is incorrect in this context.

× I sing song

✓ I sing songs

The noun 'song' should be plural 'songs' to correctly express the general activity of singing multiple songs.

× I listen on my TV

✓ I listen to my TV

The correct preposition after 'listen' when referring to a source is 'to', not 'on'.

× I sing song and most of the time I listen on my TV when I do household charos.

✓ I sing songs and most of the time I listen to my TV while I do household chores.

The sentence needed correction in pronoun usage and prepositions for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'When' is better replaced by 'while' to indicate simultaneous actions.

× When I got leisure time

✓ When I have leisure time

The phrase 'got' is past tense and does not fit the habitual present context. 'Have' is the correct present tense verb to express habitual possession of leisure time.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are acceptable past participles, but 'learned' is more common in Canadian English.

× sometimes I try to sing with the lyrics so that time I sing a song but I don't have any interest in singing so sometime I sing but it not more than.

✓ Sometimes I try to sing with the lyrics; at those times I sing a song, but I don't have much interest in singing, so sometimes I sing, but not more than that.

The sentence had tense inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'it not more than' is incomplete and unclear; it was corrected to 'not more than that' for clarity.

× so sometime I sing but it not more than.

✓ so sometimes I sing, but not more than that.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The phrase was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually it's depend on the on my mood.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood.

The phrase 'it's depend' is incorrect; the verb should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'on the on my mood' is redundant and incorrect; 'on my mood' is correct.

× Actually it's depend on the on my mood.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood.

The verb 'depend' must be conjugated as 'depends' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'.

× Sometime I sing with my mom's and for old song

✓ Sometimes I sing with my mom and old songs

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Mom's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'mom'. 'Old song' should be plural 'old songs' to indicate multiple songs.

× I like to sing with lyrics

✓ I like to sing with lyrics

This phrase is acceptable; no correction needed here.

× so I enjoy at that time in my leisure time.

✓ so I enjoy that time in my leisure time.

The preposition 'at' is unnecessary before 'that time'. Removing 'at' improves sentence flow and correctness.

× Of course it's a bring happiness for people.

✓ Of course it brings happiness to people.

The phrase 'it's a bring' is incorrect; 'it brings' is the correct present tense verb form. Also, 'happiness for people' is better expressed as 'happiness to people'.

× I sing song and even I listen song on TV.

✓ I sing songs and even listen to songs on TV.

'Listen song' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to songs'. Also, 'sing song' should be plural 'sing songs'.

× Even I use airports when I listening songs and singing with and I enjoyed my leisure time and I concentrate easily on my work.

✓ Even when I use airports, I listen to songs and sing, and I enjoy my leisure time and concentrate easily on my work.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'listening songs' should be 'listen to songs'; 'singing with' is incomplete and unclear; 'I enjoyed' should be 'I enjoy' to maintain present tense; sentence structure was improved for clarity.