Singing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了对唱歌的热情，但句子结构有些重复且不够简洁。建议使用更自然流畅的表达，避免冗余，并注意语法错误，如"lead"应为"led"。

예시: I have loved singing since childhood because my mother, a famous singer in China, inspired me. Listening to her songs helped me appreciate meaningful lyrics and relax.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，如"have been started"和"the the"。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态，并避免重复。

예시: I started learning to sing from my mother when I was seven. She taught me practical skills during weekend lessons, which helped me improve quickly.

제안: 回答较长且有些口语化，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免使用口语填充词如"you know"，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: I want to sing for anyone who enjoys music because sharing my emotions through songs brings happiness to others, which I find very rewarding.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误，如"zones"应为"songs"，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达观点，并注意语法正确。

예시: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because songs express the emotions and ideas of the writers and composers, which can uplift listeners' moods.

× That always lead me to enjoy and appreciate those kind of famous lyrics and also I get a lot of ideas from them and I found it always relaxed me.

✓ That always leads me to enjoy and appreciate those kinds of famous lyrics, and also I get a lot of ideas from them, and I find it always relaxes me.

主语是单数（That），谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式（leads）。'those kind'应为复数形式'those kinds'。另外，时态应保持一致，'found'改为现在时'find'，'relaxed'改为'relaxes'。

× Basically I have been started learning from my mother when I was very young, at the age of seven in primary school.

✓ Basically, I started learning from my mother when I was very young, at the age of seven in primary school.

'have been started'结构错误，正确表达应为一般过去时'started'，因为动作发生在过去的具体时间点。

× So actually at that time I received the the academic courses from my mother at the weekend.

✓ So actually at that time I received academic courses from my mother at the weekend.

'the the'是重复错误，应去掉一个。'academic courses'前不需要定冠词'the'，因为这里指的是泛指的课程。

× So basically I would like, say, anyone who wants to listen to my songs because I think transferring my emotions and my thoughts through the lyrics and also the tunes of my songs can always provide people with happiness, which is my honor, you know?

✓ So basically, I would like to sing for anyone who wants to listen to my songs because I think transferring my emotions and my thoughts through the lyrics and the tunes of my songs can always provide people with happiness, which is my honor, you know?

句子缺少动词，'would like'后应接动词不定式'to sing'。

× Well, I would absolutely say yes. The main reason is that zones always contains a variety of emotions from the writer and also the composer will put their thoughts and also some interesting ideas into the songs in order to make the readers or listeners to happier.

✓ Well, I would absolutely say yes. The main reason is that songs always contain a variety of emotions from the writer, and also the composer puts their thoughts and some interesting ideas into the songs in order to make the readers or listeners happier.

'zones'应为'songs'。'contains'应改为复数形式'contain'，因为主语是复数'songs'。'composer'是单数，谓语动词应为'puts'。'to happier'中'to'多余，应去掉。